Mugendramon Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [center][center][IMG]http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8853/soulcore.jpg[/IMG][/center][center] [/center][center][i]Lore:[/i][/center][center][i]You can Special Summon this card after 3 or more monsters you control are destroyed by the same card (either by battle or by a card effect). You can Tribute Summon this card by removing from play DARK monsters in your Graveyard that were destroyed this turn. Once per turn, you can send 1 DARK monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to add 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove 2 DARK monsters in your Deck and Graveyard to destroy all monsters you control.[/i][/center][center][i] [/i][/center][center]Feel free to (and please do) comment/rate/etc.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ringmaster Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 o.o Huh...odd choice of card effects. First off, I'd say either increase his ATK/DEF, or decrease his level, 10 seems a bit much for what he does. XD Other then that, I like it! It's a nice recycle card, and it can be excellent for helping regenerate cards from the Grave by sending them there yourself. Nice job! Although I'm really confused on the last part, seems like a really hefty thing to do. Perhaps just destroy one? Rating: 6/10 Nice job, but final effect just seems much, and it doesn't seem super original. XP Still prefer Orbs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='The Ringmaster' timestamp='1290913845' post='4814999'] o.o Huh...odd choice of card effects. First off, I'd say either increase his ATK/DEF, or decrease his level, 10 seems a bit much for what he does. XD Other then that, I like it! It's a nice recycle card, and it can be excellent for helping regenerate cards from the Grave by sending them there yourself. Nice job! Although I'm really confused on the last part, seems like a really hefty thing to do. Perhaps just destroy one? Rating: 6/10 Nice job, but final effect just seems much, and it doesn't seem super original. XP Still prefer Orbs. [/quote] This is a card I made out of thin air. I didn't expect it to get 11/10's, so thanks. Several issues you pointed out are true. Actually, the last effect was an attempt to say in a twisted way that it revives itself, but one would figure out this won't happen much unless you swarm abnormally fast. And yes, I'll probably lower the Level. 2 Tributes for 4000 ATK would be too little, wound't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='The Ringmaster' timestamp='1290913845' post='4814999'] o.o Huh...odd choice of card effects. First off, I'd say either increase his ATK/DEF, or decrease his level, 10 seems a bit much for what he does. XD Other then that, I like it! It's a nice recycle card, and it can be excellent for helping regenerate cards from the Grave by sending them there yourself. Nice job! Although I'm really confused on the last part, seems like a really hefty thing to do. Perhaps just destroy one? Rating: 6/10 Nice job, but final effect just seems much, and it doesn't seem super original. XP Still prefer Orbs. [/quote] ^What this guy said!^ but an 8' instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ringmaster Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1290914185' post='4815009'] 2 Tributes for 4000 ATK would be too little, wound't it? [/quote] Not sure I get what you mean by this. Do you mean that 2 Tributes for a monster with 4,000 ATK is far too little Tributes, then I'd say, eh, I've seen worse. XD Personally, I don't think the ATK or DEF thing is the issue. I think the effect is. Although it's a good recycle card, for a level ten, it seems to lack power and menace. I send DARKs to the Grave!....and that's basically it. I know a lot of DARK monsters want to be in the Grave, but it still seems lacking to me. So I'd say, either lower the level and change the effect, or increase the ATK and do nothing. Maybe include that it can ONLY be Special Summoned by its effect, that might help qualms about a 4,000 easy played monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 True. So true. I'd stick to raising its ATK. Anyway, let this Topic die. No need to keep commenting on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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