First card :D

[macktheknife123]

hey guys here is my very first card... hope ya like it


[img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5023/322249e.jpg[/img]

rate.....and dance and drink tabasco

[snowyash]

Very basic Vanilla. At least it's posted right.

The card itself is fairly weak, DH Defender is a better wall and doesn't need a tribute. If you're going to make a Normal Monster, it'd help if the 'story' on the card was a bit more interesting.

5/10

Mainly because an effect would be better, also UP'd card and grammar and spelling is shaky.

[macktheknife123]

[quote name='Skizo' timestamp='1291060680' post='4818717']
Very basic Vanilla. At least it's posted right.

The card itself is fairly weak, DH Defender is a better wall and doesn't need a tribute. If you're goig to make a Normal Monster, it'd help if the 'story' on the card was a bit more interesting.

5/10

Mainly because an effect would be better, also UP'd card and grammar and spelling is shaky.
[/quote]
ahh crap....... well at least ur honest about it........ill improve in my next one.......and btw what do u think is a good defensive or offensive stat according to level?

[snowyash]

For your card, a good example would be Labyrinth Wall - Level 5, 0 ATK and 3000 DEF.

Although, a decent effect would be more helpful. High DEF monsters generally work well with effect negation.

[Demon wolf]

[quote name='macktheknife123' timestamp='1291060913' post='4818725']
ahh crap....... well at least ur honest about it........ill improve in my next one.......and btw what do u think is a good defensive or offensive stat according to level?
[/quote]

Defensive, but lower the level and the D put some more ATK and it will be fine

5/10

[macktheknife123]

@skizo: okay...so like with every water monster that goes to my graveyard i get to look at the opponents hand and choose a spell card or trap card and that card cannot be used(so basically graveyard) and if i do that this monsters defense goes down by 700 for te next two turns
how bout that?

@Demon Wolf: well i plan this card to be defensiv so there no point :/

[Ярополк Пономарёв]

Name and creativity: 2/5
Picture: 2/5
OTK: (not factored): 8/10
Effect, ATK, DEF balance: 28/30
[b]TOTAL[/b] 4/5 (****)
Unlimited.
NOTE: Rating System only Determines status (Unlimited, Limited, Semi-Limited, Banned, etc.) This system does not show underpowered cards.
Underpowered, and Normal Cards don't cut it anymore here. Please do only Effect cards as there are a billon cards lie this.

[snowyash]

[quote]okay...so like with every water monster that goes to my graveyard i get to look at the opponents hand and choose a spell card or trap card and that card cannot be used(so basically graveyard) and if i do that this monsters defense goes down by 700 for te next two turns
how bout that?[/quote]

Nice concept, but leaves the card weak. Seeing your opponents hand is nice though. Although, with a bit of changing, it could be good WATER support. Here's an idea:

Keep everything the same so far, A Legedary Ocean makes it easier to play.

Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can change it to face-up Defense Position. While this card is face-up on your side of the field, if a WATER monster you control is sent to the Graveyard, look at your opponents hand and remove from play 1 Spell or Trap Card in their hand. If they only have Monster Cards in their hand, you take 1000 points of damage.

Probably OP'd, but probably useful as well.

[macktheknife123]

[quote name='Anger Level' timestamp='1291061938' post='4818784']
Name and creativity: 2/5
Picture: 2/5
OTK: (not factored): 8/10
Effect, ATK, DEF balance: 28/30
[b]TOTAL[/b] 4/5 (****)
Unlimited.
NOTE: Rating System only Determines status (Unlimited, Limited, Semi-Limited, Banned, etc.) This system does not show underpowered cards.
Underpowered, and Normal Cards don't cut it anymore here. Please do only Effect cards as there are a billon cards lie this.
[/quote]
thanks....but i quite admire normal cards. i think any yugioh player shud really hve the balls to put a normal into their deck
just sayin >.>
but thanks for the advice...il work on it

[Ярополк Пономарёв]

[quote name='macktheknife123' timestamp='1291062184' post='4818798']
thanks....but i quite admire normal cards. i think any yugioh player shud really hve the balls to put a normal into their deck
just sayin >.>
but thanks for the advice...il work on it
[/quote]


its just tht half the normal monsters have terrible attack. I am interested in say, summoned Skull, Blue-Eyes, and gene-Warped, and mabye labarynth wall.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='Anger Level' timestamp='1291062322' post='4818801']
its just tht half the normal monsters have terrible attack. I am interested in say, summoned Skull, Blue-Eyes, and gene-Warped, and mabye labarynth wall.
[/quote]
Lack of Dark Magician=Fail! j/k

Anyway, Normal monsters aren't that amazing unless they actually have support, that's why cards like Blue-Eyes and Dark Magician still get some play time.

[Sotos]

Well, really not much to rate since it's a vanilla, but I'll give it a 7/10...
Seriously, it would be of much more use a Lv.4 monster with 1800-1900 ATK...
Still, I like the pic...^^