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ckram

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It's not entirely bad, although it would be great if it had a downside, ya know.

 

 

And perhaps rolls 5-6 should be changed to just 6. That way you would have room to add a downside (It's probably good to make that a less chance then the 4-5)

 

 

 

Oh, yeah, and DON'T POST THE SAME THREAD LIKE 5 TIMES!!!!

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I don't see too many grammatical errors.

 

And he only made a few minor errors in the OCG.

 

 

The first sentence is unnecessary, that's the only time you'd be able to activate it anyways.

and it should be "4 or lower"

 

Those are the only ones I can see, at least.

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