darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 What do you think? First....[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4032/323079.jpg[/img][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4032/323079.jpg[/img] [size="6"][u][b] And the Morph [/b] [/u] [/size] [spoiler][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/4032/323079.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/4032/323079.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='darkstar1013' timestamp='1291085814' post='4819708'] What do you think? [/quote] what do i think of what i dont see anything Nvm interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Andybaby1989' timestamp='1291086141' post='4819741'] what do i think of what i dont see anything Nvm interesting [/quote] whoops, its up again. The pics are back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Master Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 You need to seriously check the OCG, it is a Turn not a round. It's also overpowered. By the way "Eternal-Light Dragon" doesn't need to be stated that it cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, and cannot be a spirit unless it is sent back to the hand.(Extra Deck in this case.) 0.5/10 Here is some OCG for you. "Eternal-Light Dragon" 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card gains 300 ATK each End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. "Eternal-Darkness Dragon" This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Eternal-Light Dragon" you control. This card gains 400 ATK each End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by battle it is not destoryed until the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Justicemaster' timestamp='1291086769' post='4819756'] You need to seriously check the OCG, it is a Turn not a round. It's also overpowered. By the way "Eternal-Light Dragon" doesn't need to be stated that it cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, and cannot be a spirit unless it is sent back to the hand.(Extra Deck in this case.) 0.5/10 Here is some OCG for you. "Eternal-Light Dragon" 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card gains 300 ATK each End Phase. If this card destroys a monster by battle, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. "Eternal-Darkness Dragon" This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Eternal-Light Dragon" you control. This card gains 400 ATK each End Phase. If this card would be destroyed by battle it is not destoryed until the End Phase. [/quote] well, as you can see, im new. so..... il get on it right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Master Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='darkstar1013' timestamp='1291087201' post='4819772'] well, as you can see, im new. so..... il get on it right away. [/quote] I know. I don't mean to seem all "YOU SUCK!" In-fact, I was probably mostly annoyed at the fact no one had pointed this out. You have an okay idea and with the new OCG you get a 7/10. You obviously have far more potintial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Justicemaster' timestamp='1291087392' post='4819776'] I know. I don't mean to seem all "YOU SUCK!" In-fact, I was probably mostly annoyed at the fact no one had pointed this out. You have an okay idea and with the new OCG you get a 7/10. You obviously have far more potintial. [/quote] Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Cheese Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Ok sorry i didnt see the pics I see your new here so ill give you 5/10 You need to Fix OCG You dont say "survived" you say "each turn this card gains 400 ATK points" A card cannot "lose" it is sent to the graveyard One more thing. These pictures are [u][b][i]VERY VERY[/i][/b][/u] good i havent seen such good quality pics in a while so thats a 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Smiley ' timestamp='1291087575' post='4819780'] Ok sorry i didnt see the pics I see your new here so ill give you 5/10 You need to Fix OCG You dont say "survived" you say "each turn this card gains 400 ATK points" A card cannot "lose" it is sent to the graveyard One more thing. These pictures are [u][b][i]VERY VERY[/i][/b][/u] good i havent seen such good quality pics in a while so thats a 6/10 [/quote] fixed the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Cheese Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='darkstar1013' timestamp='1291088162' post='4819795'] fixed the OCG [/quote] Wow u fixed it up good for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Smiley ' timestamp='1291088308' post='4819801'] Wow u fixed it up good for a new member [/quote] Thanks to Justicemaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Cheese Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 ello moto ...................................................DUH UH UH DUH UH DUH ..DUH.. DUH.. DAAAHH DUH DUH DA DA DUHHHH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Both are really Over Powered, but your OCG fixes are right on the money. Reasons they're too strong are: Light: Too strong with no drawback or hard-to-meet summoning conditions. The Graveyard recycle is too strong for any kind of monster, makes it too easy to recycle powerful cards like Monster Reborn. DarK: Once again, no real drawback. Not being able to be destroyed by battle isn't that big of a problem if the monster cant be topped in attack already. Also for future cards, try to avoid using an inverted negative pic of another card that you made. Seems a little lazy. And try to avoid posts like your last one, they can be seen as spam and you might get in trouble for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Here is something... Spirits Return to hand after the turn is over... 3/10 Welcome to Card Maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkstar1013 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1291090094' post='4819856'] Both are really Over Powered, but your OCG fixes are right on the money. Reasons they're too strong are: Light: Too strong with no drawback or hard-to-meet summoning conditions. The Graveyard recycle is too strong for any kind of monster, makes it too easy to recycle powerful cards like Monster Reborn. DarK: Once again, no real drawback. Not being able to be destroyed by battle isn't that big of a problem if the monster cant be topped in attack already. Also for future cards, try to avoid using an inverted negative pic of another card that you made. Seems a little lazy. And try to avoid posts like your last one, they can be seen as spam and you might get in trouble for it. [/quote] I didn't invert it, i totaly recolored it. They are supposed to look the same. they are the same, just dark, and light..... of corse they are high powered.... they are RARE! thanks for the comment[quote name='senatheEND' timestamp='1291090432' post='4819867'] Here is something... Spirits Return to hand after the turn is over... 3/10 Welcome to Card Maker [/quote] Thanks for the "welcome" [quote name='darkstar1013' timestamp='1291091483' post='4819889'] I didn't invert it, i totaly recolored it. They are supposed to look the same. they are the same, just dark, and light..... of corse they are high powered.... they are RARE! thanks for the comment Thanks for the "welcome" [/quote] Any ideas??? Anyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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