Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4569/318489.jpg[/img][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6151/318489v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/9618/318489e.jpg[/img][img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4569/318489.jpg[/img] [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4569/318489.jpg[/img][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/4569/318489.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/4569/318489.jpg[/img][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5138/318489j.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Oh look, these again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vermillion Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 5/10 Points on for each card having a different effect that, for the most part, isn't just a copy + paste of the others. Points off for a few OCG errors, for unoriginality, and for bland effects. As Jazin implied, this sort of set is done all the time. Perhaps if each card wasn't just "[Element] Dragon" and say, you had a Sea Serpent, a Fiend, a Fairy, etc. it would make it a more original set. Keep going, though. The pics are nice - better quality than most cards you see here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Vermillion' timestamp='1291113785' post='4820151'] 5/10 Points on for each card having a different effect that, for the most part, isn't just a copy + paste of the others. Points off for a few OCG errors, for unoriginality, and for bland effects. As Jazin implied, this sort of set is done all the time. Perhaps if each card wasn't just "[Element] Dragon" and say, you had a Sea Serpent, a Fiend, a Fairy, etc. it would make it a more original set. Keep going, though. The pics are nice - better quality than most cards you see here. [/quote] well im up for suggestions to help me imprvoe my dragons i really don't get how OCG TCG works really i thought the effects were original i guess not i guess it has to be long to be original.. this is suppose to be a DRAGONS set and a bit space themed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 The main problem with your OCG is that you have English grammer errors. Earth World Dragon is the only one with a complete sentence, and the only words that should be capitalized are the same as in English grammer with the addition of words like Spell/Trap Card, Graveyard, Deck, Attack/Defense Position, Life Points, etc. Also, effects don't have to be long to be original, but all your effects have in some way been done. Light World Dragon's effect looks like a spin-off of Ancient Gear monsters, Wind World Dragon is the classic discard a card effect, and Earth World Dragon's is the same as one of the Six Samurais(can't remember which) and Drillroid. Also, with today's meta, sometimes 1 effect doesn't quite cut it. And yes, your pics are quite good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 ok that Helps people just say whats wrong and not how to fix it mey spelling isnt that all great so yea that probbly always be there but ill try to fix it ok so i just need to add a effect and i think i can do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 I'm not looking at spelling so much as sentence structure, I find grammer to be more important than how well you can spell. Ending on a good note, at least these aren't the really OP'd cards some new members like to throw onto here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1291142763' post='4820641'] I'm not looking at spelling so much as sentence structure, I find grammer to be more important than how well you can spell. Ending on a good note, at least these aren't the really OP'd cards some new members like to throw onto here. [/quote] well by spelling i meant my Grammar as well and I'm trying to think on what i can add to my cards i had a idea for my earth dragon with its current effect. As long as there another 'World Dragon' with a different name on the Field this card can not be targeted by an attack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardmaster791 Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 where did you get your earth world dragon pic i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andybaby1989 Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Edited the effects and think they are more original now so please tell me what u think and i know there still grammar mistakes Added 2 cards aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue_Wave Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 i like them 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyakan Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 World Dragon Egg's picture is a screenshot from Dragonfable, no? You have a few OCG errors, but overall it's pretty decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vermillion Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 New effects much improve the set! 7/10 Also, I cannot stress how much I love those pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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