Goryas, Feathered Malevolency

[.:Black Rose:.]

Hello. This is my first card on yugiohcardmaker, so please comment, rate, and fix any errors I made.

[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8807/322977.jpg[/img]

Effect:

1 Tuner Monster + 2 or more non-Tuner Monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, select and apply one of the following effects according to the Attribute(s) of the non-Tuner Monsters used to Summon this card as this card's effect:
-EARTH: If this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, increase your life points by an amount equal to 200x the level of the destroyed monster.
-FIRE: Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to send the top card on the top of your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard.
-LIGHT: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent must show each card he/she draws during his/her Draw Phase.

I got the image from Jazin Kay's archive.

[.:Black Rose:.]

bump

[.:Black Rose:.]

bump. anyone?

[~Shin~]

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1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, it gain 1 of the following effects based on the Attribute of a non-Tuner Monster used as Synchro Material Monster for this card:
-EARTH: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, gain Life Points equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200.
-FIRE: Once per turn, by paying 500 Life Points, pick up and discard a card from the top of your opponent's Deck.
-LIGHT: While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent must show any card he/she draws during his/her Draw Phase.
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WELCOME TO YCM
Now I do not agree with you on the attributes (EARTH, FIRE and LIGHT) it should be EARTH, WIND and LIGHT.
This card can be useful in many decks since it own diverse effects but still balance because of the way it gain effect and its material however the last effect will be better with an drawback. 7/10[/center]

[.:Black Rose:.]

thanks for the feedback. is it good for a first card?

[~Shin~]

Well it got 7/10 so yes it is good.

[Venom]

You ask if its good? Man, its awesome for your first card. I like the multiple effect gain you gave to your beast. I agree with Basara, the Attributes seem a bit off, but the rest is very good. 8/10, and Welcome to YCM! =3

[.:Black Rose:.]

Thanks for the warm welcome! Expect more cards from me soon.

[Venom]

Keep them coming! =D

[Demon wolf]

a warm welcome from me,

Now it's good a card but fix it up a little.

[SuperNarb]

Now Demon Wolf I must say I hate it when people post "Make it better" and then don't say how.
But now to the card. Your first one you say? are you sure. Because it is amazing for a first card, I mean getting the OCG right and everything, I just don't like the pic much but the effects are good, not overpowered, and not underpowered, very creative. 8/10, and Welcome to YCM!

[.:Black Rose:.]

Thanks!

[The Sleeping Dude]

a warm welcome from me.awesome card anyways the effects pf FIRE is knda boring for a multi effect my suggestion is try 2 cards instead of 1 to boost more power on the card.(not trying to OP your card since this a suggestion) but overall its great