gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 This is the description for Wrath of Hortkyru-Malevolent Dragon lv12Can only be summoned by sacrifice of Wrath of Hortkyru-Malevolent Dragon lv10 from your side of the field after all other malevolent dragons have been summoned.During summon your opponent cannot activate any spekk or trap cards that target this cardAfter summon activate 2 of these effects-Destroy a number of cards on your opponents field equivalent to the number you discard from your hand-This monster gains 1000 attack points for every wrath of hortkyru monster in your graveyard-your opponent loses 2000 lifepoints.-This card cannot be destroyed by magic and traps and effect monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 You need to improve your pictures, the quality on the ones you have used are not good. Also 1 of your pictures is from Star Wars Ep 2 Another is off a real Yu-Gi-Oh Card You have posted 1 card twice Darkbeast is not an official type, its unrealistic you need " 's on fusions Fusion Summon Normal Summoned Set This Special Summoned Spell and Trap Cards opponent's ATK not attack They are just some of the errors within these cards ^^ Your new so i will let you off though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 sorry i knew about the type and the two cards but i dint know how to make it better ill try harder next time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Some Doubles, Really bad pictures, overpowed. But at least its more than one card, most newbies post one card, so for a new member its not THAT bad 4/10 im not saying i like them tho, at least its in the RIGHT section! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 i dont know how to make the image quality better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 sorry i knew about the type and the two cards but i dint know how to make it better ill try harder next time! Dont worry, we all start off like it. I now am considered one of the better card makers on this site, and yet i started off with Grammar and OCG errors galore lol You will get better ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 I thort they were good.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Thats always the problem, the maker always thinks that, its not until you let others judge them, when you realise just how bad they are, it happens to all. The card maker will always be biast, as they created the cards. By letting others judge them, you will see your mistakes, learn from them, and get better, then eventually, what you should do is remake your old sets, brand new without errors, much like i am doing ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 thanks and do you know how to make the image quality better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Well the best thing to do is to only use images of good quality itself, mainly those from deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Work on the grammar and the quality of the pictures, because of these mistakes, it doesn't make the cards look so good...If you need any help, or if you have some questions about how to decide on which picture looks best... etc... feel free to pm me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gtfgygy Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Im now making a mario deck so look out for it coz the image quality is good and ill double check grammar and everything so mario luigi bullet bill wario.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 pics could be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Dj said it all... The quality of the pictures 'eh are at the least only bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 The pics....And, well, the rest, they arent great, but they ae ok for a first ^_^6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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