werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ok i made this card to be realistic and all so tell me what you think and plz im all open for new ideas!he is close to the bottom srry . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Devil is an unrealistic type Bad bad quality picture spelling errors Grammar errors OCG errors. Could be improved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 what card?????????????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 hes taken it down now lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Whats up with this picture, i really dislike this card.Could really be improved.2.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ok im srry im a noob at forums so we and i dont mean to take it down lol but dj osiris what grammer errors and the sparda is suppose to be like that that is hes name and the triggered thing can u tell me how it would be spelled and im a noob so what is ocg?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 OCG = Official Card Game, how your effect is worded, if its not worded as it would be on an Official Card, its called an OCG error. Your Mistakes destroysSpecial SummonDeckGraveyardYour OCG errors are the words 'he' and 'gets', you need to reword the effect so its correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ok im srry im a noob at forums so we and i dont mean to take it down lol but dj osiris what grammer errors and the sparda is suppose to be like that that is hes name and the triggered thing can u tell me how it would be spelled and im a noob so what is ocg?? Yes Dj is right you do have OCG errors.And OCG stand for Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ummm.... pop culture and if your gonna add a dmc character, have them recolored like i did ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 well then ill work on them and thx i tried to fix the pics but i cant find a descent pic of dante so yea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 [attachment=20408][attachment=20409]ok i did some changes i think this should work better now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Work on the quality and choices of your pictures, and work on your grammar. Once you correct these mistakes, you'll be a great cardmaker! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 thx its just that i cant find a good one for dante himself i need to look at devienart right ??but thnx i have some stupid cards like wal-mart but where should i put in at in the forums?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ok i finally found a new pic of it and it looks good i think lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 It better than the other one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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