♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 [center] [size="3"][b]Set info:[/b][/size] Trying to make as much "Ninja" cards as possible, feel free to help out in any way! [size="5"][b]Rate/Hate Enjoy.[/b][/size] [spoiler=Ninjas] [spoiler=White Ninja Warrior] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/27xoytg.jpg[/IMG] Lore: When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, increase your Life Points by 100 x the destroyed monster's Level. Only once, if this card increases your Life Points by more then 1000, increase this card's Level by 2 and it's ATK and DEF by 500, and it gains the following effect: * Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 "Ninja" monster you control instead. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Werewolf Ninja] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/4lpn9v.jpg[/IMG] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 1 "Ninja" Warrior-Type monster you control. When this card attacks a monster you opponent controls in Defense Position, increase the ATK of this card by 500 during the Damage Step only. When this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, you can Special Summon the monster from your Graveyard used to Summon this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Tech Ninja] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2cgc8dk.jpg[/IMG] Lore: While this remains face-up on the field, all "Ninja" monsters you control are unaffected by Trap Cards. When your opponent activates a Trap Card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts a total of 2000 damage, this card gains the following effect: * Once per turn, destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Cyborg Tech Ninja] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/rk53x1.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Smoke Ninja] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2u4q45y.jpg[/IMG] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 A bit OP since I believe it could just keep gaining and gaining ATK , maybe add something like if you active the effect you cant attack? Maybe a bit of wrong OCG and in the 2nd sentence you spelt this wrong. Ok pic thought. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 I better add where it can only be used once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ninjas"]Y'know there already is an "Ninja" Archtype?[/url] But lets comment on the card shall we? OCG fix: This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When [b]this[/b] card destroys a monster your opponent controls, increase your Life Points by 100 [s]for each Level on the destroyed monster[/s] x the destroyed monster's Level. If this card increases your Life Points [s]over[/s] [b]by more then[/b] 1000, increase this [b]card's Level[/b][s]e Level of this card[/s] by 2 and it's ATK and DEF by 500, and [s]you can now activate[/s] [b]it gains[/b] the following effect: * [b]Once per turn, w[/b]hen this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 "Ninja" monster you control [b]instead[/b] [s]to negate the destruction of this card once[/s]. Not a big fan of the pic myslef. It's gaining power is a bit broken as it can be used continuously, otherwise a fine card. A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 Wow Lexadin, you truly are the best card maker ever! Thanks for the OCG fix on the card and i didn't know there was already a "ninja" arch-type >.< Well anyways mine will be supporting that arch-type.What would be the right OCG terms to limit the effect of this card once? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1291380672' post='4825626'] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ninjas"]Y'know there already is an "Ninja" Archtype?[/url] But lets comment on the card shall we? OCG fix: This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When [b]this[/b] card destroys a monster your opponent controls, increase your Life Points by 100 [s]for each Level on the destroyed monster[/s] x the destroyed monster's Level. If this card increases your Life Points [s]over[/s] [b]by more then[/b] 1000, increase this [b]card's Level[/b][s]e Level of this card[/s] by 2 and it's ATK and DEF by 500, and [s]you can now activate[/s] [b]it gains[/b] the following effect: * [b]Once per turn, w[/b]hen this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 "Ninja" monster you control [b]instead[/b] [s]to negate the destruction of this card once[/s]. Not a big fan of the pic myslef. It's gaining power is a bit broken as it can be used continuously, otherwise a fine card. A 7/10 [/quote] there is also already a white ninja : http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20061227035442/yugioh/images/5/5c/WhiteNinjaTLM-EN-C-1E.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 @Master: That would be replacing "Once per turn" with "Only once". @Shiny Azelf Fan 333: Lol, yeah forgot about him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkMugen Posted December 3, 2010 Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1291380672' post='4825626'] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ninjas"]Y'know there already is an "Ninja" Archtype?[/url] [/quote] Yea but no one likes them lol [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1291380059' post='4825609'] [center] [b]Lore:[/b] [i]This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, increase your Life Points by 100 x the destroyed monster's Level. If this card increases your Life Points by more then 1000, increase this card's Level by 2 and it's ATK and DEF by 500, and it gains the following effect: * Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 "Ninja" monster you control instead.[/i] [/center] [/quote] This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard, place 1 'ninja' counter (max 3.) on this card. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for each counter. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 1 counter instead. I like this a little better. But its just a suggestion. I really do hate long descriptions unless there is a line that reads: You win the game by reading this entire card.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2010 Thanks guys and will change the name then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 My I suggest "White stealth ninja" or "White ninja warrior"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 White ninja warrior is great! Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Your welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkzombimaster400 Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 nice card,but mabey change effect to where you only get bonus ATK and effect until end phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Nah I'll leave it like that since it can only gain it once.Werewolf Ninja added' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 first one is very OP attack twice with 1700 ATK plus can increase its ATK and gain easy life points? no more like attack twice and increase atk but lose life points. OCG stated before 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 That's why i said only once, so not op'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 ok didnt see that but i agree rating 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Ite thanks man that's better.Should I take out the "This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase." to make these cards more balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Changed up the effects for all cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 2 new monster cards added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 Hey mate I sent you a card hope you got it and liked it. Nice set so far matey keep the ace cards coming!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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