NEW MACHINA MONSTER

[.:Black Rose:.]

And now may I present Machina Cannonblazer!

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Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Machina" monster, except "Machina Forcefield", from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can equip this card to a Machine-Type monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Defense Position. During battle between an opponent's monster and the equipped monster while it is in Defense Position, if the ATK of the attacking monster is lower than the DEF of the attacked monster during the Damage Step, destroy the attacking monster and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's life points equal to the level of the destroyed monster x100 (Damage calculation is not applied). (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

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Lore:
Increase the ATK of all "Machina" monsters on your side of the field by 300. When a "Machina" monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to add that card to your hand.

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Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add up to 2 level 4 or lower "Machina" monsters from your Deck to your hand. If you add 2 cards by this card's effect and at least 1 of the added cards is not a "Machina Swarm", send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard and select and destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

[img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/193/322977v.jpg[/img]

Lore:
"Machina Synchron" + 1 or more non-tuner "Machina" monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can add up to 5 cards from your Graveyard to your hand. For each "Machina" monster added to your hand by this card's effect, increase the ATK of this card by 200.

[img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/193/322977v.jpg[/img]

Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 "Machina" monster from your deck to your hand, except "Machina Synchron". Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each "Machina" monster in your hand.

[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3465/322977d.jpg[/img]

Lore:
"Machina Synchron" + "Machina Force" + 1 or more non-tuner "Machina" monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, increase the ATK of this card by the total levels of all "Machina" monsters in your hand x100. This card cannot declare an attack unless you pay 1000 Life Points, nor can it declare an attack if your Life Points are under 3000. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in Attack Position, you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard, and if it was a Monster Card, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to the level of the discarded monster x200. This card cannot attack this turn if you use this effect.

[img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8807/322977.jpg[/img]

Lore:
"Machina Forcefield" + 1 level 4 or higher "Machina" monster
This card can only be Special Summoned from the Extra Deck by removing from play "Machina Forcefield" while it is equipped to a face-up "Machina" monster you control, and by paying 800 Life Points. (You do not use "Polymerization".) If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, if you have another face-up "Machina" monster on your side of the field, when your opponent activates a card effect that designates this card as a target, switch the effect target to another monster on your side of the field.

[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/8807/322977.jpg[/img]

Woot! Hurrah for vanillas!

[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/3465/322977d.jpg[/img]

Lore:
This card can attack while it is in face-up Defense Position on your side of the field. During your Standby Phase, place 1 "Machina Slave Counter" on this card. Increase the ATK of all face-up "Machina" monsters on your side of the field by 200 for each "Machina Slave Counter" on this card. When this card has 5 counters on it, during your End Phase, remove all counters from this card and select and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field.

[img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8807/322977.jpg[/img]

Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play a "Machina" monster(s) in your Graveyard. The original ATK of this card becomes the number of "Machina" monsters you removed from play when you Special Summoned this card x700 points. This card is destroyed unless you have another face-up "Machina" monster on your side of the field. During each of your End Phases, Tribute 1 monster you control and inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to the level of the tributed monster x200.

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/8807/322977.jpg[/img]

Lore:
When this card is Normal Summoned, you may add 1 "Machina" monster from your Deck to your hand, except "Machina Cannonblazer". Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, you may tribute 1 face-up "Machina" monster you control and send it to the Graveyard, then inflict Direct Damage to your opponent equal to the level of the tributed monster x200. If you activate this card's effect while you have no cards in your hand, add the tributed monster to your hand instead of sending it to the Graveyard.

[Zektor]

no OCG errors nice picture nothing is wrong IMO so i give it a 10/10. one thing that card can easily deal 800 damage + destroy the opponents monster

[Hizu X]

Very nice, nough said right there
9/10

[.:Black Rose:.]

should I maybe add a level or drawback in the effect?

[quote name='Hizu X' timestamp='1291427681' post='4827227']
Very nice, nough said right there
9/10
[/quote]

Thanks.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

You should add a Level or 2, great card btw, a great help and support to the Machina monsters, 10'

[.:Black Rose:.]

Thanks! It's my second card and I'm already loving YCM!

[quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1291427901' post='4827235']
You should add a Level or 2, great card btw, a great help and support to the Machina monsters, 10'
[/quote]

There, I added a level and slightly bumped up the DEF. Check the original post to see changes.

[Demon wolf]

Great card, I can use this in my machine deck new guy!!! 10/10 + 1 rep

[.:Black Rose:.]

[quote name='Demon wolf' timestamp='1291428424' post='4827259']
Great card, I can use this in my machine deck new guy!!! 10/10 + 1 rep
[/quote]

Sweet! Thanks!

[.:Black Rose:.]

Imma start adding more cards soon!

[Arcarus-Angel of Darkness]

Yeah cool card take a look at the shops yuo cuold find a cool new card template

[.:Black Rose:.]

I've added more cards!

[quote name='libra-anubis' timestamp='1291477020' post='4828224']
Yeah cool card take a look at the shops yuo cuold find a cool new card template
[/quote]

I'm trying to make them fit as much as possible to the Machina Structure Deck, but thanks for the idea!

[Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1]

cooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how did you do that? all of it.

[.:Black Rose:.]

[quote name='tmana jama' timestamp='1291477383' post='4828237']
cooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how did you do that? all of it.
[/quote]

I don't really know, I just like making cards!

[Demon wolf]

Great cards, not one single mistake. 15/10 + 1 rep

[DarkMugen]

Am I the only one that thinks Junkyard Machina is broken?
Machinas are broken enough without synchroing.

But I do like the Machina Swarm, even if it is a little OP.

Try and cut down the effects.

[.:Black Rose:.]

[quote name='Demon wolf' timestamp='1291481314' post='4828394']
Great cards, not one single mistake. 15/10 + 1 rep
[/quote]

All right! Thanks guys! Expect a Machina Force - based Synchro card next!

[quote name='DarkMugen' timestamp='1291482257' post='4828451']
Am I the only one that thinks Junkyard Machina is broken?
Machinas are broken enough without synchroing.

But I do like the Machina Swarm, even if it is a little OP.

Try and cut down the effects.
[/quote]
Broken? Meaning what exactly?

Machina Devastator has been added!

[Demon wolf]

Did you just add the sycrho monster? nice 10/10

[.:Black Rose:.]

thanx. any requests for future cards?

[Demon wolf]

Yes, how about a fusion or a perfect union monster.

[.:Black Rose:.]

By perfect Union do you mean something like XYZ Dragon Cannon?

[Demon wolf]

Yes, something like that or have you heard the card called "Oilman"

[beefman]

Those cards are awesome! I wish the Machina Mayhem that I got came with them. 10/10, no OCG errors that I see, and pics are great! +1 rep

[.:Black Rose:.]

[quote name='Demon wolf' timestamp='1291485158' post='4828649']
Yes, how about a fusion or a perfect union monster.
[/quote]
OK it looks like a Fusion Monster's on the forecast!

[noraai]

Overall OK cards. About Junkyard Machina, it's very OP'ed. Think about it, add 5 cards from your Graveyard to your hand? Are you serious? And for every ''Machina'' monster you return to your hand, you increase it's ATK by 200 points? That's just too OP'ed. You can add (example: Magical Cylinder, Dark Hole and lets say 3 ''Machina'' monsters). OK. It's ATK becomes 2600 and you got Dark Hole and Magical Cylinder in your hand to use again. Isn't that OP'ed? Definitely change the effect, completely.

Machina Devastator: In the list of materials, it says ''Machina Force'', what monster is that?

Rating:

Pictures: 2/2 (JazinKay's archive? XD)
OCG: 2.8/3
Effect: 1.3/3 (almost all monsters had similar effects)
Balance: 1.4/2

Overall: 7.5/10

[.:Black Rose:.]

I understand your concern about Junkyard Machina, I'll see if I can change the effect. As for your review, the cards have similar effects because they're part of the same set (Machinas) and work together to create strategies. Also, Machina Force is a real card available in the Machina Structure deck (google it if you want).