Hizu X Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [img]http://img602.imageshack.us/img602/8518/320168.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4052/320168h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1526/320168k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/5029/320168p.jpg[/img] These are some of the 14 I am making tonight. I would like to know what all is wrong with them as they are now. Thank you.bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AbbatonStrikes Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Hey mate could you post the effects underneath so I/we can give you edit help. Your Ritual Card needs a Ritual Spell Card to go with it, abit like making a Synchro with a certain Tuner Monster then no posting that. If you want to PM me the other cards Id be happy to help you out mate A quick few pointers types are in capital like Dragon, Fiend, Fish etc Tribute, Special Summon, Ritual Summon and Normal Summon or Set are al in capitals You may want to give em a Set number like DRAD-EN001 and so on I've never seen full stops in the cards name before oh and Spell Card, Trap Card and Level is in capitals too Volcanis - "This card cannot be destroyed by battle" instead of "in battle" as you put. Nice try, good effort Im sure you'll go far opn YCM keep it up bossman!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hizu X Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='AbbatonStrikes' timestamp='1291439958' post='4827564'] Hey mate could you post the effects underneath so I/we can give you edit help. Your Ritual Card needs a Ritual Spell Card to go with it, abit like making a Synchro with a certain Tuner Monster then no posting that. If you want to PM me the other cards Id be happy to help you out mate A quick few pointers types are in capital like Dragon, Fiend, Fish etc Tribute, Special Summon, Ritual Summon and Normal Summon or Set are al in capitals You may want to give em a Set number like DRAD-EN001 and so on I've never seen full stops in the cards name before oh and Spell Card, Trap Card and Level is in capitals too Volcanis - "This card cannot be destroyed by battle" instead of "in battle" as you put. Nice try, good effort Im sure you'll go far opn YCM keep it up bossman!! [/quote] Okay, I am gonna send you the unfineshed copies of all of them [the ones that only have the basic structure with no effects yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Ok player Ill take alook and show you a ritual Dragon-Type monster I made if you'd like. If its ok for me to post a card on your thread of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hizu X Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='AbbatonStrikes' timestamp='1291440844' post='4827588'] Ok player Ill take alook and show you a ritual Dragon-Type monster I made if you'd like. If its ok for me to post a card on your thread of course. [/quote] Okay here are the onse I have set up [not done] so far [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8518/320168.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/5453/320168t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/8518/320168.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5049/320168j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/8518/320168.jpg[/img] [img]http://img602.imageshack.us/img602/7044/320168o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/3963/320168m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/5453/320168t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7858/320168e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/8518/320168.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/1327/320168x.jpg[/img] I know I need alot of help and also sure.. I will be quite pleased to see it. PS: like I said they are only BETA versions right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Here's my card for you. My set is a 0 ATK and 0 DEF, so the effects all lower ATK damage or increase each cards own. If you have any comments please do pop em below mate, hope it gives you a few ideas of your own. [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6606/123878.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/6606/123878.jpg[/img] What I find a good rule of thumb for ATK is Level 4 -1900 to 1000, Level 5 1700 to 2300, level 6 2000 to 2500, Level 7 2300 to 2600, Level 8 2500 to 3000, Level 9 2800 - 3600, Level 10 3400 to 4000 of course there an be exceptions to rules Effects, DEF, Summoning restrictions. Normal Monsters should have nice long interesting descriptions such as for your Dragon "Raven - Oblivion" something like this: An ancient golden dragon of the skies. Its great and terrible power has layed waste to many cultures over the centuries, very few have stood against this great titan and survived. Many people consider the dragon to now be a myth, but it lays in wait for a strong soul to release it from its slumber. Just off the top of my head, sure you can do better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hizu X Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 [quote name='AbbatonStrikes' timestamp='1291442949' post='4827631'] Here's my card for you. My set is a 0 ATK and 0 DEF, so the effects all lower ATK damage or increase each cards own. If you have any comments please do pop em below mate, hope it gives you a few ideas of your own. [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6606/123878.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/6606/123878.jpg[/img] What I find a good rule of thumb for ATK is Level 4 -1900 to 1000, Level 5 1700 to 2300, level 6 2000 to 2500, Level 7 2300 to 2600, Level 8 2500 to 3000, Level 9 2800 - 3600, Level 10 3400 to 4000 of course there an be exceptions to rules Effects, DEF, Summoning restrictions. Normal Monsters should have nice long interesting descriptions such as for your Dragon "Raven - Oblivion" something like this: An ancient golden dragon of the skies. Its great and terrible power has layed waste to many cultures over the centuries, very few have stood against this great titan and survived. Many people consider the dragon to now be a myth, but it lays in wait for a strong soul to release it from its slumber. Just off the top of my head, sure you can do better [/quote] #1 Your cards are beautiful. #2 Like I said they are still in full beta and now that I know thumbs for star levels I can full the expansian of my Raven deck then move to the other ones I have stocked up. Thank you for the advice and pointers by the way. I will use them to make cards to the best of my ability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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