My first monster

[shadowstruck]

My first monster i have created its my also my first time here so no harsh words

[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/3213/325175.jpg[/img]

[spoiler='Lore']1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters
Once per turn, you can equip an Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard to this card. You can send 1 Equip Spell Cards equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.[/spoiler]

[Pepperyena]

A tiny OCG error, but not bad.
Picture: 4.5/5
Name: 4.5/5
Effect: 8/10
Originality: 8/10

8.3/10

I'm impressed

[shadowstruck]

thnx for a positive comment for the card

[Hizu X]

Pic(is the pic good?): 1/1
Effect(is it balanced?): 3/4
OCG(how good is your grammer?): 2/2
Creativity(did you get creative with it's effect?): 2/3
Does it fit(contest only, did you follow the specifications?): 9/10

[The Sleeping Dude]

nice card and and almost the effect of Gilford of Legend. but pepperhyena wats the ocg error cant see it

[MystirMeme]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters
Once per turn, you can equip an Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard to this card. You can send 1 Equip Spell Card[font="Arial Black"]s[/font] equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

Basically the s. Otherwise this card is pretty good. I could definitely see myself using this card in a deck. I would suggest reducing the effects a tad bit as it seems a bit OP. being able to destroy a card jsut by sending an equip and getting one back with his effect once per turn seems kinda broken to me. I suggest reducing the first effect to when he is summoned and the second one to once per turn.

Still a good card. 9/10

[The Sleeping Dude]

[quote name='Dragon Master Zero' timestamp='1291446736' post='4827717']
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fiend-Type monsters
Once per turn, you can equip an Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard to this card. You can send 1 Equip Spell Card[font="Arial Black"]s[/font] equipped to this card to the Graveyard to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.
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didnt see that maybe shadowstruck didnt see that too