Jump to content

Quick Card

Six Samz 500

By Six Samz 500
in Realistic Cards

Recommended Posts

DarkMugen Newbie

DarkMugen

Posted
Posted

[quote name='DEATHBRINGER ZX' timestamp='1291471733' post='4828088']
i like it :D good pic,OCG and title! 9/10
[/quote]

OCG is wrong. Are you blind? O_O
[quote]
If a monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this card is destroyed, draw 1 card during the End Phase of this turn.[/quote]

If the effect of the card is negated, then the effect to draw is negated therefore making it useless. So I changed it to 'destroyed.'

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Master White Newbie

Master White

Posted
Posted
Here you go, better OCG.

If a monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this cards effect was negated, while in your Graveyard, you can draw 1 additional card during your Draw Phase.

Op'd, needs to have a draw back. Think of something, unique effect though, nice work.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Six Samz 500 Newbie

Six Samz 500

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='General White' timestamp='1291489821' post='4828944']
Here you go, better OCG.

If a monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this cards effect was negated, while in your Graveyard, you can draw 1 additional card during your Draw Phase.

Op'd, needs to have a draw back. Think of something, unique effect though, nice work.
[/quote]

not really theres 2 costs to get the draw.
and the destruction gives no advantage and you cant get both
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Master White Newbie

Master White

Posted
Posted
I'm lost at what you are saying, but yes, destruction does give help. Your monster dies, you can destroy 1 card, any card, make it monster and it'd be fine. But leave it as is, you can kill a Spell or Trap card to, which is useful, but it has no drawback. Second, you wanted to make it so you'd draw a card if this card would be negated, well, virtually you could negate it on your own just to draw 1 card, and a drawing 1 card is alright, but throw three of these in your deck, it could draw 3 cards for no price at all...

So, at least make it limited to monster destruction....
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Six Samz 500 Newbie

Six Samz 500

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='General White' timestamp='1291495380' post='4829206']
I'm lost at what you are saying, but yes, destruction does give help. Your monster dies, you can destroy 1 card, any card, make it monster and it'd be fine. But leave it as is, you can kill a Spell or Trap card to, which is useful, but it has no drawback. Second, you wanted to make it so you'd draw a card if this card would be negated, well, virtually you could negate it on your own just to draw 1 card, and a drawing 1 card is alright, but throw three of these in your deck, it could draw 3 cards for no price at all...

So, at least make it limited to monster destruction....
[/quote]
negating your own card would be stupid and a waste of cards. On the desroying, if you monster dies and you lose the spell too thats a -2 and you then destroy 1 card which still makes it a -1 in terms of card advantage thats why its not broken.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Master White Newbie

Master White

Posted
Posted
[quote name='yamibakura51' timestamp='1291495784' post='4829234']
negating your own card would be stupid and a waste of cards. On the desroying, if you monster dies and you lose the spell too thats a -2 and you then destroy 1 card which still makes it a -1 in terms of card advantage thats why its not broken.
[/quote]

You don't call the card used as part of a cost, you never do...
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Master White Newbie

Master White

Posted
Posted
[quote name='yamibakura51' timestamp='1291499080' post='4829389']
not as acost as a used card. its a 2 for 1
[/quote]
Well still, being used still don't cut it for me, sorry, others might be willing to agree with you as its a -2 +1, but I still say its a -1 +2...

But I do not rate anymore, just critique.
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Go to topic listing
×
×
  • Create New...