beefman Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 This is a set that I have been working on for a loooooong time. It's mainly about Dragons, and the cover card is Heaven Shine Dragon. I'm expecting good ratings, so please be nice - this is only my very first post! Cards: 40 Monsters: 20 [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/931/226908o.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon one level 5 or lower monster from your Graveyard. [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/9378/226908k.jpg[/img] Lore: Each time this card attacks, it gains 400 ATK, before damage calculation. [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/8066/226908s.jpg[/img] Lore: You can pay 800 life points to tribute this face-up card and special summon one level 8 Dragon-Type monster from your hand. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/4491/226908.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, by paying 800 Life Points, you can tribute one Dragon-type monster on your side of the field. This card gains the tributed monster's ATK for the rest of your turn. When this card attacks, any damage taken to either player is doubled. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/4491/226908.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is normal summoned, you can destroy up to 2 spell or trap cards on the field. [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8066/226908s.jpg[/img] Lore: If you control no monsters on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/3563/226908z.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly and is not destroyed by battle. Any battle damage taken from an opponent's attacking monster is doubled. [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/4720/226908r.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, by paying 500 Life Points, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7267/226908h.jpg[/img] Lore: Each time this card is attacked, it gains 400 defense, before damage calculation. [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/2905/226908g.jpg[/img] Lore: Negate and destroy any Spell or Trap cards that target this monster. Any monster that destroys this card loses 500 ATK. [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/6291/226908y.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly and is not affected by the effects of Spell or Trap cards. [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2673/226908c.jpg[/img] Lore: This fearsome dragon hides in the darkness and strikes when necessary, catching opponents off guard. [img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9558/226908w.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, you may add 1 WIND Dragon-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. [img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/7267/226908h.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can not be Special Summoned. Each time this card attacks, you must pay 1000 Life Points. [img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9378/226908k.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned, by paying 500 Life Points, you can Special Summon one level 5 or lower monster card form your hand. [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/3707/226908e.jpg[/img] Lore: While this card is in face-up attack position, no face-up WATER Dragon-Type monsters (including this card) you control are destroyed by battle. [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/4491/226908.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Special Summoned in attack position, you can destroy up to 2 monster cards on the field. [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/4491/226908.jpg[/img] Lore: This powerful dragon can barrel through walls of steel with it's rock-hard head. Even large monsters are afraid to approach this mighty creature. [img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/3563/226908z.jpg[/img] Lore: This giant dragon flies high above the sky to attack unsuspecting enemies below with fiery breath. [img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/2673/226908c.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can tribute this card to inflict to your opponent damage equal to the number of face-up Dragon-Type monsters you control (excluding this card) x400. Spells and Traps: 20 [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/6291/226908y.jpg[/img] Lore: Each time an opponent's monster destroys a Dragon-type monster on your side of the field, by paying 400 Life Points, you can return that monster to the owner's hand. [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/7547/226908d.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon either one "Demon Rise Dragon", "Earthbound Dragon", "Heaven Shine Dragon", "Hellblaze Dragon", "Mountain Wind Dragon", or "Trench Aqua Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. This card's effect can only be used once per turn. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/2673/226908c.jpg[/img] Lore: Equip this card to a face-up Dragon-type monster on the field. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. [img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/6717/226908m.jpg[/img] Lore: When a Dragon-type monster on your side of the field is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon up to 2 Dragon-type monsters from your Deck with the same Attribute and a level lower than the destroyed monster. During each of your Standby Phases, while this card is face up on the field, you must pay 500 Life Points. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/7440/226908f.jpg[/img] Lore: When a Dragon-type monster with 1500 or more ATK is summoned, it gains 300 ATK until the 2nd Standby Phase after it was summoned. [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/7267/226908h.jpg[/img] Lore: Select a Dragon-type monster on your side of the field. Pay 500 Life Points to randomly select a card from your opponent's hand. If it is a monster card, it is treated as an equip card and is equipped to your selected monster. The equipped monster gains ATK and DEF equal to the level of the equip card x200. If it is a Spell or Trap Card, discard it to the Graveyard. [img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/3290/226908ua.jpg[/img] Lore: This card can only be activated when you have 4 or more face-up Dragon-type monsters on the field, each with different Attributes. You can tribute those cards to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined monsters' attack. [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1389/226908n.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when an opponent's card effect that would Special Summon an opponent's monster is activated. Pay 700 Life Points to negate and destroy that card. [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/3563/226908z.jpg[/img] Lore: Tribute a FIRE Attribute monster on your side of the field. Destroy one monster your opponent controls and add 1 FIRE Attribute monster from your deck to your hand. [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1160/226908t.jpg[/img] Lore: When a Dragon-type monster on your side of the field is selected as an attack target by an opponent's monster, destroy the attacking monster and end the Battle Phase. [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/931/226908o.jpg[/img] Lore: A monster that attacks may not activate effects or attack the following turn. When this face-up card is sent to the graveyard, both players take 700 points of Direct Damage. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can destroy this card. [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/4491/226908.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 500 Life Points. Each player must Special Summon as many WATER monsters possible from their Graveyard. [img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9378/226908k.jpg[/img] Lore: As long as this card is face up on the field, Dragon-type monsters with the according attributes gain the following effects: -Fire: this card gains 300 ATK. -Earth: this card can not be destroyed by card effects. -Light: each time this card attacks, you gain 300 Life Points. [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/5144/226908p.jpg[/img] Lore: Send 2 Dragon-type monsters from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8389/226908x.jpg[/img] Lore: Activate only when an opponent's Trap Card that designates one of your face-up monsters is activated. Pay 700 Life Points, and negate and destroy that card. [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/2905/226908g.jpg[/img] Lore: Until the End Phase of the turn this card was activated, when battle damage would be taken by either player, he/she gains Life Points equal to the amount of damage they would receive. [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9118/226908a.jpg[/img] Lore: Pay 700 Life Points. Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard on to your opponent's side of the field in face-up defense position, and equip it to this card. The battle position of that card can not be changed, except with a card effect. When the equipped card is destroyed, the controller of that card takes 1000 points of direct damage. When the equipped card is destroyed, destroy this card. When this card is destroyed, the equipped card is destroyed. [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/4347/226908xo.jpg[/img] Lore: Tribute one Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field. You can Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster with the same Attribute as the tributed monster from your hand. [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/9558/226908w.jpg[/img] Lore: If this card would be sent to the graveyard, it is added to the owner's hand instead. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to activate an effect according to the tributed monster's Attribute: -WIND: Destroy up to 2 spell or trap cards on the field. -FIRE: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. -WATER: Draw 2 cards. [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/7267/226908h.jpg[/img] Lore: Select a level 4 or lower monster card in your Graveyard and Special Summon it in face-up attack position. Your opponent then selects one level 4 or lower monster card from his/her Graveyard with a different Attribute and Special Summons it in face-up attack position. Please tell me about OCG errors, and please rate them well. And, bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Black Rose:. Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 I can't see like 70% of the effects, so paste the effects and ATK/DEF below the card. As it stands, you have a 7/10 for making a completed set as your first post. Good effort and +1 rep for determination. I'll see about the rest of my review once I see the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iamnitro Posted December 4, 2010 Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 I dont like it truthfully i would never use it at all wat so ever sry bro and i still think me elemental dragon deck would wreck it check it out Dragons of a New Direction Revamped lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 Oh. Well, that's OK. I wasn't expecting much - ESPECIALLY not a rep. And from someone as awesome as MysteryBanjoMan? Yeah! Do you have any other preferences for new cards though? I'm making some Ancient Gear synchrons... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 [quote name='MysteryBanjoMan' timestamp='1291491915' post='4829065'] I can't see like 70% of the effects, so paste the effects and ATK/DEF below the card. As it stands, you have a 7/10 for making a completed set as your first post. Good effort and +1 rep for determination. I'll see about the rest of my review once I see the effects. [/quote] I've posted the lores! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Black Rose:. Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 [quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1291507029' post='4829693'] Oh. Well, that's OK. I wasn't expecting much - ESPECIALLY not a rep. And from someone as awesome as MysteryBanjoMan? Yeah! Do you have any other preferences for new cards though? I'm making some Ancient Gear synchrons... [/quote] Don't push it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Sorry MBJ. Ya like, though? Check it out! I'm a 2-star! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Black Rose:. Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 [quote name='Sanphred' timestamp='1291591395' post='4832918'] Sorry MBJ. Ya like, though? Check it out! I'm a 2-star! [/quote] That's... great. Put into retrospect, 25 posts is nothing compared to the 5000 that 6-star members have, but I'm glad you see this as an accomplishment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 [quote name='MysteryBanjoMan' timestamp='1291595250' post='4833085'] That's... great. Put into retrospect, 25 posts is nothing compared to the 5000 that 6-star members have, but I'm glad you see this as an accomplishment. [/quote] One step at a time, I'm growing. You've seen my new Ancient Gears, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 Hey MBM, you haven't given me a rating yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 Come one, MysteryBanjoMan, you said you'd rate me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Black Rose:. Posted December 11, 2010 Report Share Posted December 11, 2010 Okay, okay! Here's my review: OP cards: 1. Silhouette Dragon, because it's essentially a level 3 Stone Statue of the Aztecs that can't be destroyed by battle. 2. Star Dragon. level 3, 1700 ATK that can remove an opponent's key card as long as you have the life points for it. 3. Volcano Dragon. Untouchable by spells or traps except for cards like smashing ground, 2000 DEF, and decreases an opponent's ATK by 500 if it's destroyed. Add a level or two to improve it. Overall review: Good cards. Watch out for some OCG errors, but other than that, pretty decent set. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 [quote name='MysteryBanjoMan' timestamp='1292097060' post='4844763'] Okay, okay! Here's my review: OP cards: 1. Silhouette Dragon, because it's essentially a level 3 Stone Statue of the Aztecs that can't be destroyed by battle. 2. Star Dragon. level 3, 1700 ATK that can remove an opponent's key card as long as you have the life points for it. 3. Volcano Dragon. Untouchable by spells or traps except for cards like smashing ground, 2000 DEF, and decreases an opponent's ATK by 500 if it's destroyed. Add a level or two to improve it. Overall review: Good cards. Watch out for some OCG errors, but other than that, pretty decent set. 8/10 [/quote] Thanks. I understand the OP's, but I have an excuse for silhouette dragon. If it's attacked by an opponents monster, the owner takes double damage too. Chances are if it's in attack position thats gonna happen. For the others, true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 i didn't really try to force myself to read all the cards, i can tell u plut alot of effort int hem, but fromt he cards i read i'd say there's one important aspect about sets u need to learn: Every working set, must have a shared goal. Your effects dont relate to the other cards in your set specifically, What is their main goal? increase atk? inflict damage? stalll? u need to make sure the desired goal is shared through the group of cards. But not the worst for your first try, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 That's true. I started making it in june and it became my first post on YCM. I was kinda... immature, if you call it, at the time, but I understand what you mean now. If I were to redo it (saying I had enough time) then I would add a special shared technique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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