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My first card ever.


AardvarK'

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  • 1 month later...

I'm not going to sugarcoat my comment....

OCG is well done except for two small little mistakes, the "in" between attack and this should be taken out as well as the "instead". Overall pretty good card for your first and I wish you luck in your future of card making ;)

8.5/10

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"If you do, this card cannot attack this turn."
No need for "in" in that sentence.

I would limit the Level of the monster brought back by this card (It can bring back high Level Spellcasters with little cost).

Everything else is perfect.

9.5/10
Add a little more drawback to that first effect and it'll be perfect.

AMAZING for a first card.
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