3GATES OF EVIL DECK!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

I am sooooo proud of myself it took me forever to make this but i am pleased with the results.
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[Hizu X]

These are beautiful

[Teh ZWOOTS]

Okay, it's been a long time since I was familiar with OCG, but I will do my best to remember certain rules. Please forgive me if my memory fails me, and for leaving most, if not all, rephrasing to others.
1. When highlighting a certain word in a card's name, that word should be in quotation.
For example:
All cards with "example" in their name gain 500 ATK and DEF.
2. When attributes are mentioned in cards, all letters are uppercase.
Example: Reduce the ATK of all FIRE monsters.
If, however, you mean to mention an actual monster Type, it is written as Fire-Type.
Example: For each Dragon-Type monster on your side of the Field, increase this card's ATK by 1000.
[i]I thank jad2342 for correcting me here.[/i]
3. Normal Summon, Special Summon, Set, Field, and Graveyard are all capitalized.
4. You used the word "donate" in the effect of a card which reduced your Life Points. I am not sure, but I believe you just use the word "reduce."
Example:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by reducing your Life Points by 1000.
It's either that or "inflict."
Example:
Once per turn, inflict 500 points of damage to your Life Points.
5. Although some use LP, it is Life Points.
6. Never use the word "sacrifice." I, personally, made this mistake. Replace it with "Tribute", and tribute variations.

Well, now that that's done with, I shall move on to other aspects.
Nearly all the images are to my liking, and I shall give you a high rating there. However, one of the images contained a watermark, which I hate. Try to find images without such annoying distractions. Also, some, including myself, view a black background as undesirable. This won't count against you, in this case, because I think the black background fits with the atmosphere of the picture.

Finally, I shall move onto the effects. The effects, honestly, are a bit boring. Try to make more original, intricate effects.

Other than my three categories, I noticed few errors. I will give this set a 7/10. Nice work.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

Thank you guys soooooo much for the constructive criticism. I really appreciate it and also thanks for compliments too. Although i wont change this deck i will take these into account when making future cards.

EDIT-Sorry guys some cards did not show up and some reapeated but i fixed it. Enjoy.

[Face McShooty]

[quote name='Teh ZWOOTS' timestamp='1291502026' post='4829516']
Okay, it's been a long time since I was familiar with OCG, but I will do my best to remember certain rules. Please forgive me if my memory fails me, and for leaving most, if not all, rephrasing to others.
1. When highlighting a certain word in a card's name, that word should be in quotation.
For example:
All cards with "example" in their name gain 500 ATK and DEF.
[b]2. Fire-Type, not fire type or Fire Type.[/b]
3. Normal Summon, Special Summon, Set, Field, and Graveyard are all capitalized.
4. You used the word "donate" in the effect of a card which reduced your Life Points. I am not sure, but I believe you just use the word "reduce."
Example:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by reducing your Life Points by 1000.
It's either that or "inflict."
Example:
Once per turn, inflict 500 points of damage to your Life Points.
5. Although some use LP, it is Life Points.
6. Never use the word "sacrifice." I, personally, made this mistake. Replace it with "Tribute", and tribute variations.

Well, now that that's done with, I shall move on to other aspects.
Nearly all the images are to my liking, and I shall give you a high rating there. However, one of the images contained a watermark, which I hate. Try to find images without such annoying distractions. Also, some, including myself, view a black background as undesirable. This won't count against you, in this case, because I think the black background fits with the atmosphere of the picture.

Finally, I shall move onto the effects. The effects, honestly, are a bit boring. Try to make more original, intricate effects.

Other than my three categories, I noticed few errors. I will give this set a 7/10. Nice work.
[/quote]

bolded is wrong... if your talking about the attribute its FIRE monsters... but if your talking about the type.... its not Fire... its Pyro-Type....

[Teh ZWOOTS]

[quote name='jad2342' timestamp='1291503243' post='4829549']
bolded is wrong... if your talking about the attribute its FIRE monsters... but if your talking about the type.... its not Fire... its Pyro-Type....
[/quote]
Oh, that's right. For you, Jad, I thank you for correcting me. To the original poster, I apologize for my failure.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

No problem man thanx anyway for the advice. : )

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

i guess noone likes em. (Sad face)

[Teh ZWOOTS]

[quote name='tonymann' timestamp='1291510226' post='4829791']
i guess noone likes em. (Sad face)
[/quote]
Just be patient. AoC is possibly the slowest thread in all of YCM.

EDIT:
Also, "no one" is never one word, although it can be treated as one word be adding a dash between the two words.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

alright i cant stay sad cuz yer sig cheers me up heehee well yea im sure tommorrow ill have more after all i posted this at 6

[.Starrk]

k. First off. You cannot have a monster that has an ATK of 4001. Thats what we in the card making world call, Un-realistic. There is only like one or two cards that have an attack like the one you used. It's called reaper of the cards, and it has like 1380 ATK.

Your effects and OCG aren't very good at all.

I'll give you kudo's for fairly good pics.

Also, Divine cards aren't allowed in Realistic cards.

For the honorable warrior, its stupid to give the card 10 ATK points.

The effects don't flow with the cards.

I'm really sorry if I'm harsh about this. :/

3.7/10

[Teh ZWOOTS]

[quote name='Coyote Starrk' timestamp='1291516286' post='4830001']
k. First off. You cannot have a monster that has an ATK of 4001. Thats what we in the card making world call, Un-realistic. There is only like one or two cards that have an attack like the one you used. It's called reaper of the cards, and it has like 1380 ATK.

Your effects and OCG aren't very good at all.

I'll give you kudo's for fairly good pics.

Also, Divine cards aren't allowed in Realistic cards.

For the honorable warrior, its stupid to give the card 10 ATK points.

The effects don't flow with the cards.

I'm really sorry if I'm harsh about this. :/

3.7/10
[/quote]
Divine cards aren't allowed in Realistic Cards, which is exactly why this is in Any Other Cards.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

Yea dude i hope you know this is Any Other Cards your obviously in the wrong forum thanx for the constructive criticism though you werent harsh at all.

[.Starrk]

[quote name='Teh ZWOOTS' timestamp='1291516529' post='4830012']
Divine cards aren't allowed in Realistic Cards, which is exactly why this is in Any Other Cards.
[/quote]


It is? *looks at forum.* Damn. I can fix that

@tonyman No problem

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

at least I know that i shouldnt post this in the realistic forum.
BY the way i repped you both cause you guys keep commenting

[Riku]

Not too bad I'm not the greatest on OCG I havnt rated a card or any cards in like five months. I think everyone has covered the OCG problems. 8/10

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

Thanx guys i think im gonna rate myself a 7/10 due to OCG problems.

[War Chess]

Amazing set, great images and cool effects !
9/10

[krazyxgamer]

images are good, OCG is bad, a lot of the effects are lame
it has potential though

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

thanx for yer criticism man.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

I simply love the pics. But just one thing:

Don't be bland.
Being so always turns out horrible, either because it is too OP'ed or too UP'ed.

For instance,
[img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/5361/257917y.jpg[/img]
5 turns for 100 damage! YAY! Whoo-hoo-*Explodes as 3 Meteors of Destruction come falling*
^ Terribly underpowered. Has no meaning at all except for summoning Uria, and he has all the Trap Monsters already. ^
And
[img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/3944/257917.jpg[/img]
Seriously. Change of Heart is forbidden, and it's a card that can just snatch an opponent for a turn. If you look at others, even Brain Control is on the list along with Snatch Steal. The best mind-controllers out there now are Mark of the Rose, Enemy Controller and Mind Control. Look them up; you can see how rediculously overpowered this card is.

So be more creative, know the meta, and create balanced effects. That's all I've got to say.

[Cosmic Destroyer of Tea]

Nice Decks.
Really dude, your Decks are super.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

thanx alot you guys it is soooooo great you guys are commenting.

[Dementuo]

Not sure if anyone's mentioned this, but I see two small problems with "The Higher Being":

1) It should be an Effect monster
2) Exodia's effect is a [i]condition[/i], and as such, is not actually activated. The effect is not triggered, but simply stays in effect. If you happen to have all five pieces in your hand, then you win. No "activation" to it.

[samsteam1]

best set ever dude 12/5 awsome