[BROOKLAN RAGE!] Elemental Hero Single. (edited)

[Embittered Moon]

[spoiler=original card][img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/8043/208217.jpg[/img]
"Elemental Hero Neos" + "Elemental Hero Necroshade"
This card cannot be Special Summoned except for Fusion Summoned. When this card is face-up on your side of the Field, you can return it to your Extra Deck to return "Elemental Hero Neos" from your Graveyard to your Hand. When this card attacks, inflict points of Direct Damage to your opponent's life points equal to the number of "Elemental Hero" cards in your Graveyard X10.[/spoiler]



[img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/8043/208217.jpg[/img]
"Elemental Hero Neos" + "Elemental Hero Necroshade"
This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this face-up card is on your field, you can return it to your Extra Deck to return 1 "Elemental Hero Neos" from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card attacks, inflict damage to your opponent [Life Points is not needed here] equal to the number of "Elemental Hero" cards in your Graveyard x150.

[SSStylin']

Here's your fixed OCG:

"This card cannot be Special Summoned except [b]by[/b] Fusion [b]Summon[/b]. [b]When this face-up card is on your field[/b], you can return it to your Extra Deck to return [b]1[/b] "Elemental Hero Neos" from your Graveyard to your [b]h[/b]and. When this card attacks, inflict [b]damage[/b] to your opponent's [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints equal to the number of "Elemental Hero" cards in your Graveyard x10."

Just one question - is it supposed to be x10? or x100? Because x10 is awfully weak.

In any case, let's get to the results:

Image: 10/10 -> nice aesthetic, looks like an Elemental Hero
Effect: 5/10 -> 7 if the effect damage is actually x100
OCG: 9/10 -> very few & minor errors, overall well-written
[u]Stage Results[/u]: 8/10 - [font="Times New Roman"][i][b][size="7"][color="#FFA500"]B[/color][/size][/b][size="3"]ravo![/size][/i][/font]

[beefman]

Pic: 10/10 AWESOME
Effect: 8/10 SWEET
OCG: 8/10 SWEET

Overall: 9 SICK

Nice pic mostly

[♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫]

[quote name='SSStylin'' timestamp='1291586478' post='4832637']
Here's your fixed OCG:

"This card cannot be Special Summoned except [b]by[/b] Fusion [b]Summon[/b]. [b]When this face-up card is on your field[/b], you can return it to your Extra Deck to return [b]1[/b] "Elemental Hero Neos" from your Graveyard to your [b]h[/b]and. When this card attacks, inflict [b]damage[/b] to your opponent's [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints equal to the number of "Elemental Hero" cards in your Graveyard x10."

Just one question - is it supposed to be x10? or x100? Because x10 is awfully weak.

In any case, let's get to the results:

Image: 10/10 -> nice aesthetic, looks like an Elemental Hero
Effect: 5/10 -> 7 if the effect damage is actually x100
OCG: 9/10 -> very few & minor errors, overall well-written
[u]Stage Results[/u]: 8/10 - [font="Times New Roman"][i][b][size="7"][color="#FFA500"]B[/color][/size][/b][size="3"]ravo![/size][/i][/font]
[/quote]
I completely agree with SSS 10 is awfully weak and won't get you much anywhere.
My Rate ~ 7/10

[beefman]

I'm another to agree with the "10" thing

[.:Black Rose:.]

Awesome card except for the part with '10, because, yes, as mentioned above, it is ridiculously weak. The max you could deal with that is 200, if you had no more monsters in your deck. 7/10 with the x10 effect, 9/10 without the x10 bit.

[Squirrel Girl]

Ocg fix:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this face-up card is on your field, you can return it to your Extra Deck to return 1 "Elemental Hero Neos" from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card attacks, inflict damage to your opponent [b][Life Points is not needed here][/b] equal to the number of "Elemental Hero" cards in your Graveyard x10.

Other than that, it seems UPed to me, and change it to inflict 100 instead of 10. Now it gets a 2/10

[Kuri]

Its probably the first time lifepoints could become 7930. I don't think that good now is it? Well beef it up to 200 or something then you'll get somewhere. But I don't believe in YGO do they ever use any "sub number" other than 50, so this could be an error in OCG. But 2/10

[Squirrel Girl]

Also, change the Level to 9, and the burn to 100 - 200

That will make it not UPed

[Embittered Moon]

@everybody: what I meant was x100 actually. sorry. editing

[.:Black Rose:.]

Oh ok that clears up a lot then in that case 9.5/10 for you!

[Jazin Kay]

I'd be better if it summoned Neos, instead of adding it to your hand.

[Embittered Moon]

[quote name='Jazin Kay' timestamp='1291601165' post='4833310']
I'd be better if it summoned Neos, instead of adding it to your hand.
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I thought about that as well, but I wanted to make it a balanced card. I guess you're right.

Oh, and by the way thanks for providing the image for the card in your archive. :D:D:D:D

[beefman]

[quote name='BROOKLAN RAGE!' timestamp='1291602558' post='4833349']
I thought about that as well, but I wanted to make it a balanced card. I guess you're right.

Oh, and by the way thanks for providing the image for the card in your archive. :D:D:D:D
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Jazin Kay has it all, doesn't he

[Jazin Kay]

I don't have a cat.

I've been meaning to replace my old one.

I miss you, tabby...

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[Embittered Moon]

[quote name='Jazin Kay' timestamp='1291602875' post='4833359']
I don't have a cat.

I've been meaning to replace my old one.

I miss you, tabby...

...
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sorry about that...
and no spam plz

[beefman]

[quote name='BROOKLAN RAGE!' timestamp='1291605526' post='4833443']
sorry about that...
and no spam plz
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No need to be sorry it was my fault