**_Xan_-_-_ Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 [spoiler]Spells: [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/5089/265788.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler]Traps: [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/5089/265788.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5089/265788.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/5089/265788.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4963/265788c.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler]Level 1-4 monsters: [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9902/265788i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9273/265788j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2698/265788u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/5089/265788.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/6831/265788w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6416/265788r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7/265788a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4289/265788h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4963/265788c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6416/265788r.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler]level 4+ monsters: [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9902/265788i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img602.imageshack.us/img602/5089/265788.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler]Synchro monsters: [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/5462/265788m.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Comments on how i can improve are well appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 Pretty good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 A couple of OCG errors, but don't worry about it. I'd use those cards in my deck (I LOVE machines) 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dearg Doom Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 neat cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 [quote name='awesomeness master' timestamp='1292185576' post='4847152'] neat cards. 8/10 [/quote] I agree. But maybe I'd change to 8.5/10 PS your almost a 3 star, awesomeness master! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**_Xan_-_-_ Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Thanks for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 According to my new rating system (check my sig), you're an S Rating! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Well the OCG (card grammar, how things should be written) is very poor, however your spelling is good so at least I know what you mean. Nice effects and most of the pictures are cool, can also see a few interesting combos too (i.e equiping overpowered punch (which should be a spell card) to saw battle machine). I like that its realistic, but I would also say that it is very underpowered. Your mech assault force 7 star card for example, to get a decent attack would need at least 10+ machine cards in your graveyard, not to mention removing anything up to 7 just to summon it. And your assault cannon, as another example, should need approximately 4 counters to destroy a monster, instead of 8, in my humble opinion. You don't need to make practically every card ultra rare either, else you would never collect all of the cards you wanted.. I'd say most of the cards are quite underpowered to be honest, but with a power boost and better OCG, I think they would make awesome cards. As I said, nice effects and pics (in most cases). 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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