My 1st cards: "Dragons & Flames"

[burakyilan1]

These are my first cards, I tryed to keep them as realistic as I could. Im planning on making a booster pack about them in the future so pls tell me what you think. Critism and comments are welcome and I probably messed up on grammer so pls point out any mistakes you see. Finnaly I would really apriciate it if you could give ways to make them better
ex:
instead of saying
"Its too OP"
pls try to say
"Its too OP it would be better if u decreased its ATK a bit"

here goes:
[img]http://i51.tinypic.com/2dlt56x.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/35a0ke8.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i51.tinypic.com/k4upvt.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i53.tinypic.com/200eb6w.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i56.tinypic.com/2ekuo2g.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i52.tinypic.com/2roq8fq.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i52.tinypic.com/21ln8n9.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/sf9cu9.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i55.tinypic.com/33uq161.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i51.tinypic.com/dte0h.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i53.tinypic.com/2yy5ixh.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i53.tinypic.com/9badqt.jpg[/img]
[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2j35mog.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2ai4j12.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2d9wutt.jpg[/IMG]


Im also aware that some of the image qualitys suck and that there are too many ultra rare, secret rare ect. for a booster pack.

[Newfie Kuriboh Shark]

not bad

[burakyilan1]

[quote name='newfie shark' timestamp='1291553808' post='4830954']
not bad
[/quote]
thanks

[DarkMugen]

[u][b]Shadow Leuge Dragon:[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 Dragon-Type and 1 Pyro-Type monster on your side of the field. For every FIRE monster in your graveyard, this card gains 200 ATK.
ATK: Make it 1600
DEF: Fine
Name: What is Leuge? Perhaps you meant League?

[u][b]Ultimate Collision[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: You can only activate this card while you have 4 or more cards in your hand. Destroy all cards on the field. Then discard all cards in your hand.
Note: This would get banned or limited real quick

[u][b]Obligion the flame worm/dragon[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a FIRE type monster. Once per turn, when this monster is attacked, you can decrease its ATK by 500 until the End Phase to negate an attack
ATK: Fine
DEF: 1400-1500
Name: Oblivion, the Flame Drake

I'll do the rest later when i get some time

[burakyilan1]

[quote name='DarkMugen' timestamp='1291555963' post='4831007']
[u][b]Shadow Leuge Dragon:[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 Dragon-Type and 1 Pyro-Type monster on your side of the field. For every FIRE monster in your graveyard, this card gains 200 ATK.
ATK: Make it 1600
DEF: Fine
Name: What is Leuge? Perhaps you meant League?

[u][b]Ultimate Collision[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: You can only activate this card while you have 4 or more cards in your hand. Destroy all cards on the field. Then discard all cards in your hand.
Note: This would get banned or limited real quick

[u][b]Obligion the flame worm/dragon[/b][/u]
OCG FIX/Recommendation: This card can only be used for the Synchro Summon of a FIRE type monster. Once per turn, when this monster is attacked, you can decrease its ATK by 500 until the End Phase to negate an attack
ATK: Fine
DEF: 1400-1500
Name: Oblivion, the Flame Drake

I'll do the rest later when i get some time
[/quote]

Thanks Ill do most changes pretty soone except for the 1st one since there are no pyro cards in there Ill probably make it 2 Fire or 2 dragons.