Draco Straybyrn Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ~-=*The Author's Club*=-~ Whoo, first attempt at a club like this. So, we have a Graphic Artist's Club, but why not an Author's Club? I volunteer to make it! ^_^ The point system will be as follows: When you submit an article, you'll be rated by 3 judges (Me, the Co-Owner, and the Asst Co-Owner) on your work in the categories of Creativity, Conventions, Fluency, and Structure. Each will be X/15, and that will be averaged to an X/15 rating. In turn, the three ratings shall be averaged, to produce your final Author's Points (AP) gain. Now, I realize that this is a writing club, but every time you rank up, you'll get 5 free items from my shop. Whoo. Oh, and we have contests too. 8) [align=center]To sum it up, here's the rating system: Creativity - X/15. -Notes-Conventions - X/15. -Notes-Fluency - X/15. -Notes-Structure - X/15. -Notes- Overall (Average) - X/15. -Final Statement-[/align] You may only post new works. As in, those made AFTER joining. Works made within the same day of joining are fine. I know how to tell if you're just uploading files and posting them, though, so be careful. So, ranks now? Mmk. 0-75: Aspiring Poet76-175: Novice Poet176-300: Lyrical Poet301-450: Greenhorn Author451-550: Aspiring Author551+: Grand Author I can add more if need be, but I'm pretty sure those should last us a good long while. Members! If you'd like to join, please post the name to be used on the front page in addition to the avatar to be used on the front page. You may provide a link to any site profiles you have, in addition to your best work. DarkthorneClub Owner/Leader - Aspiring Poet0/75 TehodisClub Co-Owner/Leader - Aspiring Poet28.5/75 -Undecided-Club Asst. Co-Owner/Leader - N/AN/AN/A KizziAspiring Poet0/75 bhim xDAspiring Poet0/75 Tallman95Aspiring Poet18.7/75 KidAspiring Poet2.75/75 CrazyKevAspiring Poet6.66/75 Tuffguy1992Aspiring Poet25/75 UmbraAspiring Poet13.75/75 YM7Aspiring Poet0/75 VultureAspiring Poet0/75 God KazeAspiring Poet0/75 rscrash94Aspiring Poet0/75 Lord_TobiAspiring Poet0/75 Supreme Gamesmaster YddisacAspiring Poet0/75 [align=center]Current Club Contest(Asst.) Co-Owner/Leader Contest!Submit your (best) pieces of writing to be judged for acceptance of Co-Owner. The winner will choose the Asst. Co-Owner. Due Date: 1/28/08 at 12 PM PST. Contest OVER! Winner: Tehodis! Featured Submissions!The best stuff (according to the leaders) will be linked to from here. That, and maybe some of my stuff. xD My L/C9 Teacher called it a Diatribe.Revolution 2020The Lust for Blood - Original Horror-Fantasy[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Name: Tallman95Avatar: My avatar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 name:kidavatar:mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Name: CrazyKevAvatar: The one I'm Using (If we're aloud to use animated, If not, tell me) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Firefox lets me do anything 8) Adding you all now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 When's the due date for the contest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 uh can a article be like fan fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Hopefully I can submit my next episode. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Hey, can we post regular stories, or "How to" stuff?Or just Poems, I know alot about poems.[spoiler=My poetry story]One time a wrote a poem, my first peom, with lots of rhyme words, I like the rhyme words. And I showed to my friends and they all liked it.I think I have a gift Or maybe songs, can we post songs we made up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 AW DANG i forgot you made one :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 I can't write poems I can only write storys. I'm in the top three best writers in my grade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
II DEFiiNED II Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Hmm, I am not really a writer, but, I'll join! : ) Name: JK RewriteAvi: My current avi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 well im the only person in my grade to get an c in a essay and story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Stories, Articles, Essays, Poems. Anything you've written. This includes Fanfics, and modified RP logs. If you have an RP, just convert it to a story. =p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 when does the contest ends? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 I'll proably submit my next Fanfic episode tomorrow. Kid that means you get to see it a day early.:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 uh ok and i have my story ready and darkthorne do we pm you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 First post updated, multiple times. Poems must be at least 1 page typed, double spaced 12pt font Times New Roman on word. And no one-word-per-line ones, that's cheating. Unless of course, it makes sense and has meaning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ill start right now since im bored Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Already 91 views but only 19 replies? Come on. Post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Episode 9: Sean's true story. Part 1. Zack woke up early again. This time it wasn't to just get out for exercise. This time it was to discover what Sean had been doing every morning. Alex had said he woke up every morning at 5 and went into the forest. Last time he went their he saw him but then he freak out when he started following him. Whatever he was doing it wasn't good. Zack made it to the forest at least an hour after he woke up. He looked at his watch. 5 o' clock exactly he would be here soon. Zack walked over and hid in a bush. A few minutes later Zack spotted Sean heading for the forest. As soon as he was out of sight Zack began to follow him. Sean(mumbling): Master......Zack.......anialation. Zack(thinking): What's he talking about. Who's he talking to. He had no idea what he wqas talking about and what's about this master stuff. He was even in this conversation between Sean and himself. Whatever it was about he didn't like it. Moments later Sean stopped. He activated his duel disk and drew a card. Suddenly Sean started shaking. Then some sort of blackish purple ooze came out of his eyes. Sean fell to the floor leaving the purple ooze behind. The ooze began to take form into a sort of human like figure. Zack was freaking out! The ooze took shape. It blasted through a cliff revealing a secret entrance leaving Sean's body behind. Zack rushed into the entrance. Zack: WHAT ARE YOU! Zack had come balsting into the room yelling. The creature was standing in the center of the room absorbing soem sort of energy. Creature: Ah Zack how nice of you to come. Zack: W-what are you? Creature: You mean you don't remember me? Even after all or good times together. Do you even remember my name? Zack: W-what? Creature: Oh I'm hurt. My name's Ymazo. Zack: Ymazo? Ymazo: That's right I'm your best friend remember. Zack: W-what are you talking about. Ymazo: Well it isn't fun just o talk about it how about we duel. Zack: Fine but where's your duel disk? Ymazo held up his arm. His forarm transformed into a duel disk. Zack cringed. Ymazo: So we dueling or not? Zack: S-sure. Zack&Ymazo: DUEL! Next EpsiodeEpisode 10: Sean's true story part 2. This was a more detialed but shorted episode. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Creativity - 3/15. Totally stole the whole Yubel thing from GX.Conventions - 3/15. There's a LOT of REALLY basic stuff that you didn't even bother looking for...Fluency - 8/15. It flows... kind of...Structure - 5/15. It's WAY too short. Seriously. That, and it's content-lacking. Overall - 4.95/15. It's really lacking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Creativity - 3/15. Totally stole the whole Yubel thing from GX.Conventions - 3/15. There's a LOT of REALLY basic stuff that you didn't even bother looking for...Fluency - 8/15. It flows... kind of...Structure - 5/15. It's WAY too short. Seriously. That' date=' and it's content-lacking.[/quote']I don't even know the full Yubel story I just know he's some Duel monster or something. I can fix it but you need to wait till tomorrow. It flows if you look at the reast of the episodes. I have better episodes do you want me to post one of them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted January 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 It should be able to flow within the episode, and I don't really want to re-rate it. I'll rate the next one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tallman95 Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 This is what I thhink my best episode. Episode 4: Esu. The power of the Cyber Dj's. Esu: Ok I'll start. DRAW! I summon my Cyber Dj Chronos! In attack mode! Cyber Dj ChronosType of card: Effect MonsterATK: 1500DEF: 1600Description: This card cannot declare an attack unless a Spell Card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name is face up on your side of the field. Once per turn you may discard 1 card with "Cyber Dj" or "Dj Disk" in it's card name from your hand to destroy 1face-up Spell Card on the field. Esu: Now I activate Dj Disk-Miracle Stars! Dj Disk-Miracle StarsType of card: continueis spellDescription: When this card is activated you gain 1000 Life Points. Destroy this card during the End Phase of your next turn. Esu's LP: 5000Zack's LP: 4000 Esu: I end my turn. Esu's side of the fieldMonsters: Cyber Dj Chronos ATK 1500/DEF 1600Spells/traps: Dj Disk-Miracle Stars Zack: They're pretty cool but they're no match for my gladiators. DRAW! I summon Gladiator Warrior-Sutra in attack mode! Gladiator Warrior-Sutra Type of card: Normal MonsterATK: 1500DEF: 1200 Zack: Now I activate A True Gladiator! A True GladiatorType of Card: Equip Spell CardDescription: This card can only be equip to a monster with "Gladiator Warrior" in it's card name. Double that monster's ATK and DEF points. Destroy the monster equip to this card during your End Phase. Gladiator Warrior-Sutra Type of card: Normal MonsterATK: 1500 plus power up: 3000DEF: 1200 plus power up: 2400 Zack: Now Sutra take out Chronos! Esu's LP: 3500Zack's LP: 4000 Zack: Now I end my turn. Zack's side of the fieldMonsters: noneSpells/Traps: none Esu: So you took out Chronos. There's more where that came from. DRAW! I summon Cyber Dj Novas in attack mode! Cyber Dj NovasType of card: Effect MonsterATK: 1400DEF: 1600Description: This card cannot declare an attack unless a Spell Card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name is face up on your side of the field. When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, you may Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand that inculdes "Cyber Dj" in it's card name, by paying 500 Life Points. Esu: Now I activate Novas' effect. I pay 500 Life Points..... Esu's Life Points: 3000Zack's Life Points: 4000 Esu: To summon Cyber Dj Echo in attack mode! Cyber Dj EchoType of Card: Effect MonsterATK: 1600DEF: 1100Description: This card cannot declare an attack unless a Spell Card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name is face up on your side of the field. If this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, you may search your Deck for a monster with "Cyber Dj" in it's card name and add it to your hand. Esu: Now I activate my spell card. Dj Disk-Souls of the Underworld! Dj Disk-Souls of the UnderworldType of card: Continueus Spell CardDescription: When this card is activated, Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard that inculdes "Cyber Dj" in it's card name. Destroy this card during the End Phase of the turn it was activated. Esu: Welcome back Cyber Dj Chronos! Cyber Dj ChronosType of card: Effect MonsterATK: 1500DEF: 1600Description: This card cannot declare an attack unless a Spell Card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name is face up on your side of the field. Once per turn you may discard 1 card with "Cyber Dj" or "Dj Disk" in it's card name from your hand to destroy 1face-up Spell Card on the field. Esu: Now may I say welcome to The Under Elektro Nightclub! Under Elektro NightclubType of card: Field SpellDesciption: Increae the ATK and DEF of all monsters with "Cyber Dj" in their card names by 300 points. Also once per turn, you may pay 600 Life Points in order to search your Deck for a Spell Card with "Dj Disk" in it's card name and add it to your hand. The entire gym transformed into a dance club with a huge dj table, a bunch of lights, and a whole croud of people just dancing Esu: And with that I end my turn. Esu's side of the fieldMonsters: Cyber Dj Chronos ATK 1500/DEF 1600, Cyber Dj Novas ATK 1400/DEF 1600, Cyber Dj Echo ATK 1600/DEF 1100Spells/Traps: Zack: Wait did you just say you end your turn. Esu: Yes. Yes I did. Zack: Well whatever you say. Zack(thinking): I don't get it. Why did he end his turn I was wide open. Well whatever he just gave me a seacond chance. Zack: DRAW! I set one monster card, and one face down card. I end. Zack's side of the fieldMonsters: 1 face downSpells/Traps: 1 face down Esu: I bet your wondering why I didn't attack last time. Well it was cause I wanted to bring out.........CYBER DJ TECHNOSHIVA!!!!!!!!!!! Cyber Dj TechnoshivaType of card: Effect CardATK: 2700 after power up: 3000DEF: 2700 after power up: 3000Desciption: Effect will not be stated Esu: Now Technoshiva attack his face down card!!!!! Zack: I activate my face down card! The Coming of the Gladiator! The Coming of the GladiatorType of card: Counter TrapDescription: Special Summon 1 monster with "Gladiator Warrior" in it's card name to the field. Zack: I summon Gladiator Warrior-Skatla! In attack mode! Gladiator Warrior-SkatlaType of Card: Effect MonsterATK: 3000DEF: 3000Description: Increase the ATK and DEF of every monster on the field with "Gladiator Warrior" in it's card name by 1000 points. Esu: My attack still goes through! Zack: No it doesn't. Look at my face down monster. Gladiator Warrior-DefencerType of card: Effect MonsterATK: 0 after power up 1000DEF: 3000 after power up 4000Description: During your Standby Phase remove 1 card in your hand from play. Esu: WHAT!? Esu's LP: 2000Zack's LP: 4000 Esu: I guess I end my turn. Esu's side of the fieldMonsters: Cyber Dj Technoshiva ATK 3000/DEF 3000Spells/Traps: Underground Elektro Nightclub Zack: Time to wrap this up. DRAW! I activate the spell card Weapon Change! And equip it to Gladiator Warrior-Defender. Esu: Oh man. Zack: Yeah. Now Defender attack! Esu's LP: 1000Zack's LP: 4000 Zack: Now Skatla finsh him off! Esu's LP: 0Zack's LP: 4000 Esu: Wow I lost. Your good man. Zack: Thanks it was a great duel. Esu: If you ever want to duel again I'm at the Yellow Dorm. Zack: Awsome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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