lewis atherton Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2372/303169k.jpg[/img] Their can only be 1 "Apperation of the Lake" on the field at any one time. If you draw another "Apperation of the Lake" whilst this card is on your side of the field discard your hand and re draw 5 cards, and take 300 Life points of damage for every card discarded. While this card is face up on your side of the field its name is also treated as "Umi". If this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card re summon it, its new ATK and DEF is treated as 2000 (This effect may only be used once). If this card is destroyed by battle Special Summon it to your side of the field during your next 3rd turn, its ATK is then treated as 3500 and its DEF is treated as 0. If This card is destroyed while "Umi" is on the field by battle inflict the amount of damage equal to the Monsters ATK that destroyed this card to both you and your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 Ok, now for the rating. 1) Horribly broken. Whenever it gets destroyed, it comes back stronger. Drawing another Apparation will get you a fresh hand and that last effect is horribly painful, due to the fact that the opponent will most likely use powerful monsters to destroy it by battle and the fact that it is always treated as Umi. 2) There were alot of OCG mistakes in that I found. 3) Nice art and I kinda understand the theme. Art: 9/10 OCG: 6/10 Balance: 4/10 Originality: 9/10 Overall: 7/10 You should take out one of its Reviving effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 The OCG is a bit off, but it is easoly fixable also it is way over powered, it cant be destroyed exsept if it is removed from play. You should put in that you have to sacrofice lifepoints to bring it back from the grave say 1000 or so. The pick is amazing thogh 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted December 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 The idea i was going for was to just create something very strong and useful people are always going on about alanceing a card, and OCG is not my best thing so i can understand why thast might be off but i hate the face that a card must be balanced according to some people i mean all the cards that are not balanced (i.e "goyo guardian" - prob spelt wrong) plus because of the drawback of drawing also discarding your hand can be seen as a bad thing if your working on a combo so its recomended that you would only put one or maybe 2 in a deck. Also their are cards that can get rid of its effect. anyway I have edited it lil now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 cant understand the last effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted December 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 sorry about that I have edited the last effect very slightly to make it more understandable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 Ok better. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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