ReyZaBurrel Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Card is still being worked on, Any input and correction would be nice...be brutal^^... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 The very last effect (Being destroyed immediately) is really...well, unneeded. Other than that, 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Wow, it is an awsome card. I simply adore the picture! An the grammar was great untill the very last sentance about it not beingeffected by spells and being destroyed by monster effect =/Very nice!9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReyZaBurrel Posted January 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Thanks..i will fix that as soon as i can, appreciate it..but the effects of being destroyed immadetaly..is because it is uaffected by spell cards...but yea..i kninda new there wer errors there^^>.ill fix it ^_~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 I agree, the immediate destruction isn't necessary since you have to remove 2 specific monsters from your Grave. Also, I'd increase the number of S/T cards that you can destroy. Once again, you'll be removing 2 Specific monsters, so that's a pretty big weight on the negative aspect of the card. So you can give yourself a little room when making the positive aspects of the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Ok, cool though, a brand new member, and you make a awesome card! Hope to see more of you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Grammar and OCG errors, shes hardly 'dark' if shes 'shining' is she and if the picture is ment to look like DMG then it truely doesnt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Ok' date=' cool though, a brand new member, and you make a awesome card! Hope to see more of you![/quote'] Indeed. Is it just me, or has there been a great increase in new members lately? (it could just be me, I don't really visit the Realistic Card section that much) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Yeah, there have been a ton of new people, and no offence to them, but alot of them are not too good, but still, there are the 1 in 100 good card makers, like this guy ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReyZaBurrel Posted January 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 HaHa. you flatter me, and i agree...with DJ..i wanst thinking alot when i made this card..hes right^^...im still having alot of trouble...with the column card effects though^^..but thanks for the coments^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Your welcome ^_^ You see many members see a card and praise it, without thinking fully into the card itself. And if 1 member praises it, the rest tend to follow, only those obscure comments you may get, truely mean something ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Yeah, Osiris would know, he is great at card making and rating ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted January 27, 2008 Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Oh man, that's a great card, basically perfect, and probably the best I've seen from a newbie, so 9.6/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonZ Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Um. The picture is... Less than good. I really hate to rain on everyone's parade here... but I consider myself a hard rater. And that includes grammar errors (I can even see my own) and suitability of pictures. And that does NOT look like DMG. And the verdict is... 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 The picture... is amazing.... :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 I like it very much 9/10 Love the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 picture, get rid of it. basicly it would look anythingh but a dark magician, the have the metal suit and this isn't at all near to that. rest is very great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imadjinn Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Shining Dark Magician GirlLight / 7 / Spellcaster / Effect / 2800 / 2200This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Dark Magician Girl" and 1 "Dark Magician" in your Graveyard. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell Cards. Question: Why is it LIGHT if it's still Dark Magician Girl? Other than that, not a bad card. Rather generic effect, but oh well. Brilliant choice of art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Very nice card, i really like the picture, keep it up.And since you are well a fairy new member it makes this card better.Im sure you have at least one mistake but besides that i rate it a "very" well deserved 9/10. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 I <3 this card!! Though I think you should make part of her effect, "This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK." 9.48/10.00 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Great job! ^ _ ^ 10/10!!! :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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