Cards I made

[22popz]

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This card's effect can be activated only during the Damage Step of either player's turn. Increase attack and defence of all Diclonius monsters by 500.

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During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Lucy" from your deck or graveyard.

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If this card is Special Summoned through the effect of "Nyu", select 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field and remove them from play.

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Arrogant and insensitive blacksmith skilled in using and forging katanas.

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Luke's live-in assistant. A demon borned from a Demonic Pact made by Lisa Oakwood, Luke's childhood friend.

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This card is used to Ritual Summon "Luke #2". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equal 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand.

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This card is Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Blacksmith Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equals 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to allow this card to attack your opponent's Life Points directly, then change this card to Defense Position after using this effect.

[Indignation211]

Its a good start, but there is much room for improvement. Nyu and Ball need to be changed to Effect Monsters. Also what Ritual Monster does Blacksmith Ritual summon?

Here are the changes I suggest:
Nyu: change to Effect Monster, change lore to "During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Lucy" from your deck or graveyard."

Lucy: change lore to "If this card is Special Summoned through the effect of "Nyu", select 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field and remove them from play."

Luke #2: Im assuming this is what Blacksmith Ritual is supposed to summon. Change to Ritual Monster. Change Lore to "This card is Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Blacksmith Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equals 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to allow this card to attack your opponent's Life Points directly, then change this card to Defense Position after using this effect."

Blacksmith Ritual: Change lore to "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Luke #2". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equal 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand.

Ball: Change to Effect Monster. Change Lore to: "This card takes no Battle Damage and cannot be destroyed. Increase this card's ATK by 100 during each of your Standby Phases. You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in your opponent's hand. Your opponent cannot draw cards for 10 turns after you activate this effect."

[22popz]

[quote name='Indignation211' timestamp='1291940907' post='4840626']
Its a good start, but there is much room for improvement. Nyu and Ball need to be changed to Effect Monsters. Also what Ritual Monster does Blacksmith Ritual summon?

Here are the changes I suggest:
Nyu: change to Effect Monster, change lore to "During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Lucy" from your deck or graveyard."

Lucy: change lore to "If this card is Special Summoned through the effect of "Nyu", select 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field and remove them from play."

Luke #2: Im assuming this is what Blacksmith Ritual is supposed to summon. Change to Ritual Monster. Change Lore to "This card is Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Blacksmith Ritual". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equals 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand. You can pay 1000 Life Points to allow this card to attack your opponent's Life Points directly, then change this card to Defense Position after using this effect."

Blacksmith Ritual: Change lore to "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Luke #2". You must also Tribute monsters whose total level stars equal 7 or more from your side of the field or your hand.

Ball: Change to Effect Monster. Change Lore to: "This card takes no Battle Damage and cannot be destroyed. Increase this card's ATK by 100 during each of your Standby Phases. You can Tribute this card to destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in your opponent's hand. Your opponent cannot draw cards for 10 turns after you activate this effect."
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ball is my signature and i made it for fun Thanks for helping me.