rap god

[cena 54]

[img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6105/328052d.jpg[/img]

[White Hollow]

everything is bad about it

[War Chess]

Give up of making cards.
-10/10 and a -REP

[Limited Edition KING]

[quote name='war chess' timestamp='1291928014' post='4840185']
Give up of making cards.
-10/10 and a -REP
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[font="Verdana"][b]Wow so negative.
Instead of telling someone to give up why not tell them what they can do to make the cards they make better?
Seriously post something helpful or leave.

But it's not too bad, there are some area's that need improving for example.
- It needs a Type. Try typing Warrior.
- Eminem should be capitalized.
- Increase the Level and ATK/DEF. He's supposed to be a god as such he should have godly stats I suggest making him have 4000 ATK and DEF points each and raising his level to around level 10-12.

Also the description could use a bit more work, it just says the negative about him true he's done some negative things in his life but surely you could say something nice about his accomplishments or his music?
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[Mugendramon]

[quote name='King.' timestamp='1291928516' post='4840204']
[font="Verdana"][b]Wow so negative.
Instead of telling someone to give up why not tell them what they can do to make the cards they make better?
Seriously post something helpful or leave.

But it's not too bad, there are some area's that need improving for example.
- It needs a Type. Try typing Warrior.
- Eminem should be capitalized.
- Increase the Level and ATK/DEF. He's supposed to be a god as such he should have godly stats I suggest making him have 4000 ATK and DEF points each and raising his level to around level 10-12.

Also the description could use a bit more work, it just says the negative about him true he's done some negative things in his life but surely you could say something nice about his accomplishments or his music?
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I notices an Eminem fan here?

Anyway, rather than improving on the description, I'd say you add an effect. No card is Godly without an effect.

Everything else in above post I agree with.

Also, balanced out that negative Rep.

[beefman]

I see this is your first card... hmm...
Add a type. Maybe not a real type, but if you do, PUT THIS CARD IN THE POP CULTURE AREA

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

Im gonna give this a 2/10 it looks like it was made in 3 seconds and why dont you try effects.

[War Chess]

Yeah, I was so negative.
The card is bad x 30.000 but it has a tiny,tiny,tiny chance of becoming something.
But please, [size="7"][color="#800080"]NOT ABOUT RAP ![/color][/size]

[DL]

Get a better pic, that isn't so pixelated, and has no words.
Add a type.
Add a better description? (possibly)

It, in itself, is good however, a 4-star with 1700 ATK and 1800 DEF is something nottoo powerful to be a 5-star, and a good 4-star. Heck, I'd use it.

[Face McShooty]

[quote name='war chess' timestamp='1291939626' post='4840583']
Yeah, I was so negative.
The card is bad x 30.000 but it has a tiny,tiny,tiny chance of becoming something.
But please, [size="7"][color="#800080"]NOT ABOUT RAP ![/color][/size]
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Why not about rap? now it IS in the wrong place... it belongs in Pop Culture and could you a better description like
"Eminem was ranked 79th on the VH1 100 Greatest Artists of All-Time. Eminem was also named the Best Rapper Alive by Vibe in 2008. Eminem started of his popularity with the song "The Real Slim Shady" which was released in 2000. He followed it up with "Lose Yourself" and being the lead actor in "8 Mile. Eminem was ranked 13th on MTV's "22 Greatest Voices in Music" in 2003." or something similar to that and here's a better pic, even though the one he's got is alright
[IMG]http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh294/2be2be/eminem.jpg[/IMG]