Mew And Mewtwo

[lewis atherton]

[img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2964/303169g.jpg[/img]
Their can only be one "Mew" on the field at any one time. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. .can only be Special Summoned by removing 10 or more monsters in your Graveyard from play This card cannot be resurected from the Graveyard with any Trap or Spell Card. When this card is destroyed remove it from play. When a monster you control is attacked, if your opponent controls more monsters than you can switch the target to this card. If your opponent attacks this card, they must pay 500 Life Points times the number of monsters used to Special Summon this card. If this card would be destroyed in battle you can pay the amount of damage your opponent had taken from this cards effect to stop it from being destroyed.
[img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6294/303169oq.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing one "Mew" you control. When this card is Special Summoned you may discard your Hand and pay up to 3000 Life points. This card cannot be destroyed in battle. You can pay half of your Life Points to attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card attacks your opponents Life Points directly your opponent must discard their hand and pay 1000 Life Points, this effect can only be used every 2nd Battle Phase. This effect can only be used if you have no cards in your Hand, on your side of the field other then "Mewtwo" and have less then 1000 Life points.

[beefman]

Mewtwo could use a better picture and is kind of OP'ed

[lewis atherton]

i chose that picture because i really liked it and i dont think it oped you need to sacrifice mew and you need monsters in the grave to get mew out so i thinkk its pretty fair but thanks for you comment anyway.

[Myst]

OCG Fix:

Mew:

This [b]card[/b] cannot be Normal Summon[b]ed[/b] or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 or more [b]monsters[/b] in your Graveyard f[b]ro[/b]m play. [b]When a monster you control is attacked, i[/b]f your [b]o[/b]pponent controls more mo[b]n[/b]sters th[b]a[/b]n you [s]then[/s] [b]can switch the target to[/b] this card [s] must be their attack target[/s]. If your opponent [s]targets[/s] [b]attacks[/b] this card [s]as an attack target[/s][b],[/b] they must pay 500 Life [b]P[/b]oints times the number of monsters used to Special Summon this card.

Mew - Without crosses:

This [b]card[/b] cannot be Normal Summon[b]ed[/b] or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 or more [b]monsters[/b] in your Graveyard f[b]ro[/b]m play. [b]When a monster you control is attacked, i[/b]f your [b]o[/b]pponent controls more mo[b]n[/b]sters th[b]a[/b]n you [b]can switch the target to[/b] this card. If your opponent [b]attacks[/b] this card, they must pay 500 Life [b]P[/b]oints times the number of monsters used to Special Summon this card.

Mewtwo:

This [b]card[/b] cannot be Normal Summon[b]ed[/b] or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by [b]T[/b]ributing one "Mew" you control. This card cannot be destroyed in battle. [b]Y[/b]ou [b]can[/b] pay half of your Life [b]P[/b]oints [b]to[/b] attack your opponent[b]'[/b]s Life [b]P[/b]oints directly. [b]When[/b] this card attacks your opponents Life [b]P[/b]oints directly your opponent must discard their hand and pay 1000 Life [b]P[/b]oints, this effect can only be used every 2nd Battle Phase.

A lotta OCG errors and both of them is 2 OP'D! The effect could be better for both and the Summoning Conditions aren't that hard to achieve! Mewtwo's ATK are just 2 high and you'll win the Duel if it activates its effect! Also pics could have been rilly better! 4.5/10

[lewis atherton]

ok thank you for your help I am going to sort these cards out and if you are willing to look at them once I have edited them, I will give you a plus rep for helpful feedback also I love the mewtwo pic so im not sure about changing it.

[beefman]

[quote name='lewis atherton' timestamp='1291935798' post='4840445']
i chose that picture because i really liked it and i dont think it oped you need to sacrifice mew and you need monsters in the grave to get mew out so i thinkk its pretty fair but thanks for you comment anyway.
[/quote]

Now THOSE... are awesome pictures

[lewis atherton]

haha thank you how would you rate it out of 10 and please give feedback on how to improve?

[beefman]

[quote name='lewis atherton' timestamp='1292016741' post='4842174']
haha thank you how would you rate it out of 10 and please give feedback on how to improve?
[/quote]

Well, now... 9/10
NOT because I'm a soft rater, but because I think those are actually good cards. I've given the feedback (better pics) but those have been fixed, so... I like the effects!

EDIT: Hold on. In Mewtwo's effect, why would you want to discard your hand and pay 3000 life points???

[lewis atherton]

because of its effect it needs you too have about 1000 or less so it helps you get there but if your not using it for the effect then you dont need too

[beefman]

[quote name='lewis atherton' timestamp='1292017383' post='4842204']
because of its effect it needs you too have about 1000 or less so it helps you get there but if your not using it for the effect then you dont need too
[/quote]

Oh. That makes sense. Sorry I guess I didn't read it carefully enough. Or I didn't put 2 and 2 together. Or both. Either way, sry

[lewis atherton]

ok well thats fair you dont think that they are OP'd do you

[beefman]

[quote name='lewis atherton' timestamp='1292017809' post='4842218']
ok well thats fair you dont think that they are OP'd do you
[/quote]

Not anymore

[lewis atherton]

Ok thank you does anyone else have any comments to make i would appriciare comments on mew

[kingtj50]

good job on those cards.

[lewis atherton]

anything you would like to add i mean you havn't said what to improve or edit or why its good leaving a comment like that is spamming and some people would neg rep you for it but i wont but please be more helpful

[kingtj50]

well you could add a dark mew and a dark mewtwo and a field spell of mewtwo's fortress from pokemon the first movie. and sorry i am new at posting lol.

[lewis atherton]

well i will take that into consideration but i was hinting at the cards already here like what do you think of these

[kingtj50]

well i can't think of any thing to change and so in rating i would have to give both mew and mewtwo a 10/10.

[lewis atherton]

thank you very much does anyone else have anything they think i could improve on

[krazyxgamer]

OCG is pretty bad, i'm too lazy to fix it right now though
pics are pretty nice
effect is fairly unique
other than that, i don't have much to say 8/10

[lewis atherton]

ok well thank you for you input - but i changed a lot of ocg due to a comment above and edited the effect to stop maaking it overpowered

[lewis atherton]

bump

[beefman]

@krazyxgamer: OCG isn't that bad. It's okay.

[Pokepal17]

I love their pictures. :3
Their effects are good too; they make the Egyptian gods look like Kuriboh. lol
Keep up the good work. (b")b

[lewis atherton]

the egyptian good look like kuriboh haha i dont think they are that good but i did make effort when i made them