Some Mod Please Lock This<Thanks>

[Master White]

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[b]Lore[/b]

[i]While this card is in your Graveyard, if two or more Spell and Trap Cards you control are destroyed, you can place 1 "Hologram" counter for each card destroyed. The "Hologram" Counters are treated as the destroyed cards and get those card effects. If this card effect was used, remove this card from play and inflict 500 damage to your Life Points for each "Hologram" Counter on the field. [/i]


I made this card and then b/c of the effect, I might use it for here to, the pic isn't the greates, and the effect is ok, but the def is what I fear I may have too high.

enjoy


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[Dragon7OP]

They should be Tokens, not counters. Counters are placed on cards, tokens on the field. It's DEF is unbelievably high, especially since it operates out of the graveyard. This could easily be a Level 1 monster with 0 ATK/DEF. Also, it's last effect needs to be optional.

Other than that, great card. I can't rate it in it's current state, but it's original and useable.

[Master White]

First, Tokens aren't placed in the Spell and Trap Card zone, so what would be? Second, The last effect makes up for the defense and other things. making this a level one would be a waste. I wanted to have its effect yet also hard to get into the Graveyard.

[Dragon7OP]

[quote name='General White' timestamp='1291934243' post='4840385']
First, Tokens aren't placed in the Spell and Trap Card zone, so what would be? Second, The last effect makes up for the defense and other things. making this a level one would be a waste. I wanted to have its effect yet also hard to get into the Graveyard.
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I'm pretty sure that tokens can be placed in the Spell/Trap card zone if the effect says so. Also, it's DEF Is an issue because it would give it 10 level stars on it's own, plus an extra 1 or 2 for it's effect. Also, I think the OCG for the effect would be written differently, maybe

[I]If 2 or more Spell or Trap cards you control are destroyed, you can remove this card from play from your graveyard to place the same number of "Hologram Tokens" in your Spell/Trap card zones. These tokens are treated as the destroyed cards, and gain their effects. When this card is removed Play due to this effect, inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent for each "Hologram Token" placed with this card's effect. [/I]

[Master White]

Where do you think its gaining levels? I have said nothing on it, oh well, it's just an idea, and even if I made them tokens, it really wouldn't make it the same....Its meant to disappear after the first turn, and counters can be used without cards I'm sure, if not, i'll ask Max how to fix this card effect better, but I'll change the DEF here in a few.

[Dragon7OP]

[quote name='General White' timestamp='1291935830' post='4840446']
Where do you think its gaining levels? I have said nothing on it, oh well, it's just an idea, and even if I made them tokens, it really wouldn't make it the same....Its meant to disappear after the first turn, and counters can be used without cards I'm sure, if not, i'll ask Max how to fix this card effect better, but I'll change the DEF here in a few.
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My bad. I don't mean it gains levels, I meant the DEF alone would make it a level 10, and with it's effect added it would definitely be a level 12

[Master White]

Oh, okay, I was wondering what you meant...I was thinking, huh. Don't worry, i'm going to reword this, i found out there are some missing effects...my fault there...

Some Mod, please lock this, thanks.