Cosmic Destroyer of Tea Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 [spoiler='Monsters (18)'][spoiler='Arkian - Cosmic, Evil Lord of Arktea'][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3732/299939t.jpg[/img][img]http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/wirespy/CosmicDSCard-3.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore 1'][i]The supreme ruler of Arktea, the kingdom within the shadows. With a vast army of Shadow Knights at his disposal along with his trusty blade and his mystical powers, his shadow trembles over the lands of which he conquered with an iron fist.[/i][/spoiler] [spoiler='Lore 2'][i]1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monster In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card. While this card is face-up on the field, all “Arkian” monsters you control gains 300 ATK. Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of 1 “Arkian” monster you control (excluding this card) to 0 until the end of your opponent’s next turn to have this card gain the ATK of that monster until the end of the turn. If this card successfully destroys a monster by battle, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 card on the field.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Toxyn, Prince of Darkness'][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8697/299939w.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]The powerful prince of Arktea is almost as cruel as the iron-fisted cosmic. Not many know what happens when one gets on his bad side, but we can all say that it is not pleasant.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Zyarg, Chaos Soldier'][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2493/299939y.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]A leal soldier of Arktea. Gifted with the telekinesis, he's the smarter and powerfull soldier of the troop, trained in the underworld, he can use the shadows to protect him.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Dark Warrior'][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/1842/299939p.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore '][i]This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every face-up "Arkian" monster you control.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Ar-k Metal Spark'][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6345/299939x.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, ''Metal Space'' This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - R.S.T.U.V.'][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/3850/299939m.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore'][i]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the total original ATK of the Synchro Material Monsters used for its Synchro Summon. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, you can destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Tsoym the Ghoul Warrior'][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/7873/299939g.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Nemesis Phantasm'][img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/3707/299939.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]Dark Warrior + Zyarg, Chaos Soldier. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. This Card cannot be destroyed in a battle.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Aqua Lord'][img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1066/299939q.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 2 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summon or Set the turn you Special Summon this card. The controller of this card takes 1500 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Urgang the Beast'][img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4081/299939s.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore']This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this face-up Defense Position card is selected as an attack target, destroy this card at the end of the Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a "Arkian" card and sent to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Arkian" monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Blu, Knight of the Seven Gate'][img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5449/299939b.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore'][i]Blu, a powerfull knight of Arktea. In the category of Elite Warriors, the highest office of a knight. He can control the hell and the heaven.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Ar-k Dragon of Chaos'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/3569/299939z.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]1 Tuner + or more non-Tuner monsters. When this card is Summoned, destroy all monsters you control (except for "Arkian" monsters), then Special Summon up to 2 "Arkian" monsters from your Graveyard. During the turn this card is Summoned, "Arkian" monsters you control cannot be destroyed, and you take no Battle Damage when they battle. The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the combined original ATK of all other "Arkian" monsters you control.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Dragon A.K'][img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6345/299939x.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore'][i]This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by Removing from play 1 monster with 2000 or more ATK you control. This card gains 200 ATK for each monster your opponent controls. This card loses 500 ATK for each other monster you control.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Grim Phantasm'][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7873/299939g.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Grim Phantasm Ritual". Send 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK equal to or less than the ATK of the sent monster.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Abethedemon the Anubis Warrior'][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4757/299939v.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore'][i]The powerfull warrior of Anubis, he has traveled for years. Until reached to Arktea, the kingdom in the shadows, he met Cosmic, the lord of Arktea.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Sondance, Queen of Sondania'][img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/5259/299939k.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]Sondance, wife of Techi, and the queen of Sondania, a pacific kingdom. But she doesn't know the danger of the kingdom neighboring, Arktea.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian - Darskare'][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4081/299939s.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore '][i]When this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a "Arkian" monster, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card battles, by returning it from the field to the Deck at the end of the Battle Phase, Special Summon 1 "Arkian" monster from your Deck, except "Arkian - Darskare".[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells (4)'][spoiler='Arkian Tea'][img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1377/299939c.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]When an ''Arkian'' card destroys a monster as a result of battle and sends it to the Graveyard, increase your Life Points by the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Grim Phantasm Ritual'][img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3895/299939fo.jpg[/img][spoiler='Lore'][i]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Grim Phantasm". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 6 or more from the field or your hand.[/i][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Spacial Arkian Fusion'][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4081/299939s.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps (3)'][spoiler='Arkrash'][img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/8697/299939w.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian War'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8348/299939j.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Arkian Santcuary of Destruction'][img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8348/299939j.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [/spoiler] Not finished, really!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Revan of the Sith Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 TEA! 10/10 really creative *pays 3 dollars.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 Absolutely not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye. Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 I would not put either of those in my deck. A level 10 with only 2900ATK is just too weak, not to mention the 0 defense. Fix your OCG. 2/10. I'm glad you're not finished with these cards because there is plenty of room for improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Revan of the Sith Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 11/10 and no im not just sayin that because im in it. and Arktea is balanced because his high attack makes up for his defense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmic Destroyer of Tea Posted December 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 [quote name='tonymann' timestamp='1292016127' post='4842145'] 11/10 and no im not just sayin that because im in it. and Arktea is balanced because his high attack makes up for his defense. [/quote] Explain please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Revan of the Sith Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 WOOPS! sorry spelled his name wrong Arkian-Cosmic has a high attack but his Defense is low so therefor it is balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted December 10, 2010 Report Share Posted December 10, 2010 mmmm.. not much to say but I'll try to help u with set. 1st of let's start with the pics "Arkian - Cosmic, Evil Lord of Arktea" there a black border no one wants to c a black border crop it out and "Arkian - Nemesis Phantasm" there's writing it's a minor complaint. Fixed ur OCG: "Arkian - Dark Warrior"- for each monster you control with "Arkian" in it's name increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300. Alot of work to do but worry this is how I started as a card maker alot of mistakes. Heres my tips make card effects with unique and innovative effects, if your making a Normal Monster make sure it's description is interesting and detailed it's supposed to be it's story. Not much else to tell u... Good Luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='LRPXD' timestamp='1292022245' post='4842457'] mmmm.. not much to say but I'll try to help u with set. 1st of let's start with the pics "Arkian - Cosmic, Evil Lord of Arktea" there a black border no one wants to c a black border crop it out[/quote] By black border do you mean the one within the monster pic or the card border itself? Anyways, pretty good seat for a beginner at Card Making but of course as stated in posts above, there is always room for improvement. OCG Fix - "Arkian - Dark Warrior": This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every face-up "Arkian" monster you control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 need to work on OCG. Especcially arkian tea. 6/10 ( which means its ok) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Blu:. Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Ehh, maybe I'll have to fix the OCG of all of these cards, well except for 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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