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Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV version!


Neos Leci

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[size="3"]Cards updated, I think this should be a bit better[/size]

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[center][font="Courier New"]When this card battles with a Level 4 or lower monster, you can destroy that monster at the end of Damage Step. During the End Phase of the turn this card destroyed an opponent's monster by this effect, send this face-up card to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1 "Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV6" from your hand or Deck.[/font][/center]

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[center][font="Courier New"]While attacking, this card cannot be destroyed by battle. Destroy any monster battling with this card at the end of Damage Step. During the End Phase of the turn this card destroyed an opponent's monster by this effect, send this face-up card to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1 "Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV8" from your hand or Deck.
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[center][font="Courier New"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV6". This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Destroy any monster battling with this card at the end of Damage Step, and negate the effects of any monster destroyed by this effect.[/font][/center]
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Holy cow! I like what you've done with this card. The one issue I do have is with the LV 4 version, and that's it's absurdly low attack power. 800 ATK would basically make it a suicide monster, thus you would almost always have to use a Level Up! card in order to get the other versions, unless he's in defense mode and your opponent is using a weak monster. Now if you boosted up the ATK to 1200 and the DEF 1800 (Kinda Like V-Tiger Jet, though that's a Normal monster), I would find the massive jump in ATK for later versions to be more feasible. At least have the ATK be 1000, so it can actually kill most lower-level monsters. The other versions are awesome.

There's also a small OCG error in the LV 4 version as well. Instead of saying "During the End Phase of the turn this card destroyed an opponent's monster by this effect, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV6" from your hand or Deck," have it say this:

"During the End Phase of the turn this card destroyed an opponent's monster by this effect, send this face-up card to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1"Saint Beast Black Phoenix LV6" from your hand or Deck."

...Which is basically the same thing, only a little prettier so that the words flow together more.

Otherwise, I give this a 9/10. 10/10 if you make the suggested changes.

Also, this is just an opinion thing, but I think you should switch the artwork for LV 6 and LV 8. The LV 6 artwork looks a little too epic for the card, if you know what I mean. ;)

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