.-~ Haven't made a card in 2 months so here you go. ~-.

[Cloister]

[center]I've been on a holiday away from YCM for about 2 months and felt it was time to return. So I made a card.
I know I'm rusty so I ask you to please tell me how to improve/give critisicm.
Yeah.

[img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/8686/47839.jpg[/img]
Each time you lose or gain Life Points, this card gains ATK equal to half that amount.
You can Tribute this card to have 1 monster you control gain ATK equal to this card's ATK.





[size="1"]It's OPed isn't it?[/size]
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[Venom]

Nice and creative effect! This would combo with the Samsara Lotus . Although you could name him "Vitality Absorber"

[Cloister]

Yeah. The name was kinda lame... Thanks!

[Junk Raver]

The image is Divine, it not only goes with the Psychic theme but its generally nice art. The effect is Nice and i like the overall presentation. Psyc-up the name abit perhaps?

[Cloister]

Thanks Junk Raver!

Yeah, I got a pretty good suggestion about the name. Like I said, my first card in 2 months so I'm kinda rusty, especially with the names.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Yeah, why do I have a really annoying, nagging feeling it should be a Lv5? It probably doesn't need to be but...

Gives cards like 'Astral Barrier' more use.

I can't decide if it's overpowered or not, but I do like it.

[GamemasterGunnar]

[quote name='Tomtekorv' timestamp='1292001715' post='4841662']
[center]I've been on a holiday away from YCM for about 2 months and felt it was time to return. So I made a card.
I know I'm rusty so I ask you to please tell me how to improve/give critisicm.
Yeah.

[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/8686/47839.jpg[/img]
Each time you lose or gain Life Points, this card gains ATK equal to half that amount.
You can Tribute this card to have 1 monster you control gain ATK equal to this card's ATK.





[size="1"]It's OPed isn't it?[/size]
[/center]
[/quote] Not Op at all, you need to combo a lot to get this card's attack all that high, btw, changed the wording a bit, i think it would go,

Each time you take damage or gain Life Points, this card gains ATK equal to half of that amount.

you'd keep the rest the same. you may also want it to say

Each time you take damage or gain Life Points from a card effect, this card gains ATK equal to half of that amount.

if you wanted to nerf it a little, as for a name, I'd say it's name should be "Axon Switcher" based on the pure comboing potential he has with "Axon Kicker".

[Cloister]

Hmm... Well, since it can gain ATK from cost effects which is not treated as damage, I gave it "Each time you lose Life Points...".

I think I'll use Vitality Absorber as the new name. Liked it the most.

And thanks for the good comments!

[Cloister]

Changed the name. Bump.

[Inb4Ectinction]

That is a pretty nice picture, cool effect too. :3

[Cloister]

Thanks.