some "not related" cards of all sorts (ok not all sorts)>>

[MujinTengu]

rate commend and alike>>

[img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/6874/154564.jpg[/img]
Effect:
1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters.
Once per turn, you can select and Special Summoned 1 Fiend-Type monster from your opponent's Deck to your opponent side of the field. When this card is send from the field to the Graveyard, take control of every monster that were Special Summoned to the field by this card effect from your opponent's field or Graveyard. This card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap Cards.

[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/2180/154564c.jpg[/img]
Effect:
By Tributing 1 "Saber" monster, destroy 1 card on the field (Normal Monster Cards cannot be targeted by this card's effect). If the destroyed card is an Effect Monster Card, that card owner's Draw 1 card. A player must Tribute a monster he/she control for this effect to be activate. Both you and your opponent can use this effect as long as this card remains face-up on the field.

[img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6874/154564.jpg[/img]
Effect:
When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 2 "Monarch" monsters from your Graveyard to your side of the field. Those summons treated as a Tribute Summon. At the End Phase, destroy cards you control up to the number of cards you summoned with this card's effect and take 900 damage for each card destroyed.

[img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/8730/154564n.jpg[/img]
Effect:
You can Tribute Summon this card in face-up Attack Position by Tributing 1 Fish-Type monster. Once per turn, you can select 1 Fish-Type monster in your Graveyard, remove it from play, then select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent control, destroy it and remove 1 card in your opponent Graveyard from play.

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6874/154564.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/7949/154564w.jpg[/img]
TA Effect:
This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card is unaffected by effects that negate this card's effects except for "Holding Blood Arms". Once per your turn, this card must attack, if not, it is destroyed at the End Phase of that turn. This Monster can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. When this card inflict Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Point, that damage is negated, and your opponent's gain Life Point equal to the amount of the negated damage.

[img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/5585/154564t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8731/154564d.jpg[/img]
COTD Effect:
As long as this card remains face-up on the field all monster on the field, except DARK Monsters, lose 400 ATK and 300 DEF and turned into face-up position(Flip Effects do not activate). Then increase this card's ATK and DEF by decreased amounts.This effect is activated at the beginning of each Standby Phase of your turn. If ATK of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 400 or/and DEF of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 300 that card is destroyed. When affected cards is destroyed, ATK and DEF increase from that card is negated. decrease your Life Point by 800 at each Standby Phase of yours (this is not optional). you cannot lose the Duel by having 0 Life Points as long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field.

(7)_(7)

[MujinTengu]

Bump

[Face McShooty]

on your Ritual... did you mean Chancellor? like a Leader or did you mean to put Cancelor?
all the rest seem fine to me
9/10

[.Starrk]

Ugh. Level 3 monsters cannot have 4000 ATK, and it can also attack twice in the same battle phase? I don't think so.


Way to OP'ed.

OCG is flawed.

5/10

:/ I'm really sorry if I'm harsh.

[MujinTengu]

[quote name='Coyote Starrk' timestamp='1292176149' post='4846774']
Ugh. Level 3 monsters cannot have 4000 ATK, and it can also attack twice in the same battle phase? I don't think so.


Way to OP'ed.

OCG is flawed.

5/10

:/ I'm really sorry if I'm harsh.
[/quote]


Harsh no way ... just kidding, this is ok, and well...I dont think the level 3 monster is op'ed somehow (his effect somehow balance it a bit)...about the OCG yeah I think you damn right..and I must tell u that my language isn't so good (I mean my English) so 'tis hard to make it perfect while your language is at "beginner" level.

oh and thanks for those commends i needed them from the two of you.

oh and i meant chancellor

[MujinTengu]

BUMP So,e commands...BUMP

[GamemasterGunnar]

[quote name='Glovenaut' timestamp='1292256794' post='4849057']
BUMP So,e commands...BUMP
[/quote]
I don't want to say this, because it sounds really really mean, but I HAVE to say it. I took one look at the wall that is CotD's text box and just didn't want to read it. Sadly i feel kinda the same why for most of these, is there any way you could maybe reduce the amount of text on each card? cards can be good while having only 1 effect you know =x

[MujinTengu]

[quote name='GamemasterGunnar' timestamp='1292257165' post='4849066']
I don't want to say this, because it sounds really really mean, but I HAVE to say it. I took one look at the wall that is CotD's text box and just didn't want to read it. Sadly i feel kinda the same why for most of these, is there any way you could maybe reduce the amount of text on each card? cards can be good while having only 1 effect you know =x
[/quote]

yeah 'tis kinda big effects, but I dont know man. I just cant stop writing effects for each card i make. maybe i just like those "bunch of effect" idk. what about rate.?.. oh and to reduce the amount of text...neeeh those card are so old that i cant even remember when i created them!!so i'll leave it as it is.