Grima Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 This is one of the best cards I created, here it is: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/KannatheMightyWarriorYugiohCard.jpg[/IMG] So do you like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcarus-Angel of Darkness Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Please post the card there will be a stream of data under the card after you touch it then copy and paste the data strip in the post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyakan Posted December 12, 2010 Report Share Posted December 12, 2010 Please, no attachments. Basically this seems like a MUCH easier to summon version of 'Blue-Eyes Shining Dragon', with a lot more ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I'm glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted December 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Here's some more cards I created: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/WerewolfKnight.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/Bomb-3.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/KisaratheDragonGirl.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/AlphaBehemoth.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/LizardMancard.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/MachinaEmperor.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/MachinaPawn.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/DragoniaRuins.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/MachinaArmor.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/Bahamutcard.jpg[/IMG] So do you like them?I'll create more when I have the chance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted December 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 Those cards are in the Stucture Deck called Feudal Anger, the rest are the real yugioh cards like three Blue Eyes White Dragons and more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted December 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2010 I hope you guys like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pepperyena Posted December 26, 2010 Report Share Posted December 26, 2010 ... Um I don't think they like them, sorry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted December 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2010 ...... but like the Hidden Arsenal 1, 2 and 3 this deck has only foil cards, oh yea the effect monster version of Ra came out in the Sougin(sp) Jump magazine, and I got that cardHere's another card I created: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/DeltaDragon.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted January 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Happy new year everybody Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 In the nicest possible way, you have a lot to learn. Everyone has to start somewhere and the sooner you learn the little tricks and hints the sooner your card making will improve. I will give you some guidelines, suing your favourite card "Kana The Mighty Warrior" as an example: -Name and Pic: Your name and pic are the "shop windows" of your card, they are the aspects of a card that can attract (or in some cases repel people) from your cards. The pic has to be clear vivid and of a good quality while the name has to give it a unique quality. With your card, the pic is blurred,to close, badly coloured and squashed giving it a cheap effect, I suggest retouching it using one of your computer's programs or even selecting a new image. Secondly you name is in my oppinion bland and uninspired, this is supposed to be your favourite card so treat it with some respect and give it a name of quality. It has to be attractive unique and enticing for all to see in order to be succesful, even Warrioress Kana-Lilly would work as a name as it is silghtly different to the norm.....think outside the box. Effect: I would say as a general rule keep your card ballanced, if you want a standard, run of the mill card give it an average effect, if you want a slightly stronger card, give it a slightly better effect bu if you want a monstrously powerful card (I think that's what you were going for here) then give it a good effect but keep it within reason. ATK/DEF and the effect of a card give a card its level of balance and power so I would say that looking at this card's ATK and DEF that already it is an extreemely powerful card so the effect has to be one that will balance it out (even if you want it to have a god-like effect). In terms of the effect itself, its been done so many times before, try (like with the name and image) to be a little more creative especially if you want this to be a good card. OCG: OCG is important for the overall authenticity of a card. It is one thing to have a poor image and name but you will get found out as a card maker if your OCG is not spot-on (even I still have trouble, it is one of the hardest parts of card-making). Let's take yours: "This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card cannot be special summoned except by offering 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" on your side of the field. You can negate the effect of all Spell, Trap and Monster effects that effect this card" Although this is not abysmal there are in fact a number of errors, here's my correction "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" on your side of the field as a Tribute. Negate the effects of all Spell, Trap and Monster Cards that target this card." Captial letters, spelling mistakes, wrong wording....all small errors that make a big difference. My overall advice? use what I said as a base/a skeletal structure and create your unique cards around it. Keep all this in mind and you should be ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Misternick Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Very Sorry to say this, but I dont like any of them at all But, there nothing wrong with your idea of cardmaking Its just my way of seeing your card. My word doesnt mean anything wrong 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted January 1, 2011 Report Share Posted January 1, 2011 Listen to Chedbonlahor. His advice helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Well I was the best I can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Longsword Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 your cards are way too over powered. I could understand if it were 2 or 3 blue eyes but its not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 Here's another: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/LegendaryLizardMan.jpg[/IMG] I put alot of work on this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grima Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 Here's another: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/SkullPot.jpg[/IMG]Here's another monster card: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/SavagetheReapercard.jpg[/IMG] Here's the spell card to summon it: [IMG]http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p342/Grima4111/GrimReapersGrip.jpg[/IMG] I know the pics dosen't look right, but it's best I can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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