Almost Complete New Set!

[Lord Doransk]

Here we go! The complete set in all of its majestic glory! Thanks to RichardSteve for his help with the OCG. All opinions are welcome, as are all criticisms. Please do not hestitate to comment on anything that takes your fancy and maybe even say something positive (heaven forbid, I should faint if you do so!). Have fun browsing.
Monster Cards
Levels 5-8
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Levels 1-4
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Spell and Trap Cards
Spell Cards
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Trap Cards
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So then... Whaddya think? Bombard me with comments, people!

[Lord Doransk]

bumpity bump

[Lord Doransk]

oh come on! are they so bad they're not worthy of ANY comments? At least comment negatively if it means you'll comment at all!

[Richard Steve]

Hello there. Well overall I give this set a 8/10.
Let me give you some sincere suggestions for OCG changes and overpowered effects:
for Alabasteron Summonist I would change the OCG to (I am an analyst and all OCG corrections I'll suggest are correct with the new system style:
"Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects:
■ Place one "Infection Counter" on one "Plaguesworn" monster you control;
■ Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Plaguesworn" monster from your Deck."
Also I'd give it a 1200 ATK and 0 DEF.

for Archadion Priestess:
"When this card is Normal Summoned put 3 Infection Counters on it(max 3). Once per turn you can remove 2 Infection Counters from this card to destroy one monster your opponent controls or remove 1 Counter to inflict 500 damage to your opponent."
(yes its way too overpowered taking 1000 life points away with only one counter)
Give it a 2000 ATK and a 1700 DEF

for Gurdokk - I admit its a very original effect. 10/10 for it, BUT, the ATK at least should be reduced to 1800 or 1700. Your choice.

for Kharmalon, really nice effect. no changes.

for Mannoroth you need OCG changes!
change it to:
"You may tribute one monster you control to put 2 Infection Counters on this card(max 2). Increase this card's ATK by the number of Infection Counters on it x300."
- yeah making a tribute with one monster just to increase 300 ATK is worthless. I think it'd be much better having 2 counters instead of 1 for one monster tribute, so I changed to 2.

for Thalanos put the ATK at 0.
Its too overpowered because of the effect. or change the DEF to 0. your choice.

for Vrecht its an original effect. I love the way you use counters for this set. Good job

the demigod fits just perfectly in this set. I'd buy this set if it was real, but with some changes, including the ones I am suggesting you

the Chimera is overpowered. instead of 1000 points for each Counter do something like 400 or 500(maximum). put it level 8. and for the ATK something like 2400/2500.

Calmaryon is a good one, its one of those little monsters which always give problems to the opponent.

The Cathedral Field Spell is even more overpowered.
Once per turn you should only put one Counter and to Special Summon one Plaguesworn monster you should use 2 counters for it.

Corruption within is good. Some OCG fixes ONLY (oh and change it to a Quick-Spell that'd be great:
Tribute 1 "Plaguesworn" monster you control with one or more Infection Counters on it. Take control of a number of monsters your opponent controls equal to the number of Infection Counters of the Tributed monster and with ATK equal to or less then the tributed monster's ATK. Return these monsters to their owner's control at the end of this turn.

Necrosis is kinda overpowered. Do 300 Life Points. At least.

Phylactery needs just OCG changes:
"Equip only to a "Plaguesworn" monster you control. Put 1 Infection Counter on it and increase its ATK by 400."

The first trap is a perfect card for me too. Excellent work

Neutralising pandemic should have a little bit different effect:
"Activate when your opponent activates a Spell, Trap or Monster card effect. Remove 1 Infection Counter of a "Plaguesworn" monster you control to negate that effect and put 1 Infection Counter on another "Plaguesworn" monster you control."

The Lethality is overpowered as well.
Change it to:
"Remove all Infection Counters from "Plaguesworn" monsters you control. Destroy any number of cards your opponent controls, destroying 1 for each 2 Counters removed this way."

the last one is a good one. it shouldn't be a Counter Trap Card. Should be only a normal Trap Card.

Well that's all, I hope you like my suggestions and at least use some of them to improve your set.
Kind Regards, and see, someone added a comment - me!

[Lord Doransk]

hi ho, hi ho, bumpity bump we go...

[Lord Doransk]

bump again... lol, one comment but 86 views- quite an achievement to pull so much interest but no opinions, not even negative ones. Ah, well. Please yourselves.