ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 ok this is the first card I've made that hasn't been for a contest. [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8391/299978.jpg[/img] This card is not destroyed by battle. If this card attacks an opponent's monster and you take Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster from your Graveyard with an ATK equal or less than the Battle Damage you took. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneycombTroy Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Pretty good card. Ocg fix: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks an opponents monster with a higher attack, Special Summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster with an attack equal to or less than the Battle Damage you take. Not quite sure about the ocg fix though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Richard Steve Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='ninjarainbowcloud6!' timestamp='1292215091' post='4848372'] ok this is the first card I've made that hasn't been for a contest. [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/8391/299978.jpg[/img] This card is not destroyed by battle. If this card attacks an opponents monster and you take battle damage, special summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster from your graveyard that has an ATK equal to or less than the damage you took. [/quote] The correct OCG fix should be: This card is not destroyed by battle. (--> Yes it is correct and new form) If this card attacks an opponent's monster and you take Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster from your Graveyard with an ATK equal or less than the Battle Damage you took. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Richard Steve' timestamp='1292216461' post='4848407'] The correct OCG fix should be:This card is not destroyed by battle. (--> Yes it is correct and new form) If this card attacks an opponent's monster and you take Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster from your Graveyard with an ATK equal or less than the Battle Damage you took. [/quote] Thanks I'll fix it and do you like the card? Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='ninjarainbowcloud6!' timestamp='1292218672' post='4848436'] Thanks I'll fix it and do you like the card? Fixed [/quote] I like the card. The effect is not thaaaat original, but it's still a nice idea. Give it 7.5/10 for now. Oh and visit my new post: give me an opinion if you don't mind ;D http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/232250-new-set-legendary-realms-with-minszrai-and-cepticus-curse/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Thanks and I commented on your cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
°•Dragon Ball•° Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Richard Steve' timestamp='1292216461' post='4848407'] The correct OCG fix should be: [u][b]This card is not destroyed by battle[/b][/u]. (--> Yes it is correct and new form) If this card attacks an opponent's monster and you take Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Winged-Beast type monster from your Graveyard with an ATK equal or less than the Battle Damage you took. [/quote] Im sure the [u]RIGHT[/u] OCG is ..... [i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle[/i] if not then im sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 ...Who cares about OCG? Seriously? OT: The card is lovable. I can see the pic is from Jazin Kay (which signifies you know stuff), and it's unique, not to mention extremely balanced. Awesomeness. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='°•Dragon Ball•°' timestamp='1292223697' post='4848580'] Im sure the [u]RIGHT[/u] OCG is ..... [i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle[/i] if not then im sorry [/quote] Ok confirmed. I am an analyser for two friends for correct OCG because they're working on a new set for a group that has this project for Psychic-type monsters as they need a new revamped set. We are using lots of "this card is not destroyed by battle [b]when[/b] ...." so you're right. I'm sorry it's my head *hehe*. This card is not destroyed by battle is an OCG you use for certain specific battling monsters like "by battle with a DARK monster". So you're right. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GamemasterGunnar Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 good for Black wing and mist monsters, I like it, simple and makes sense, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='°•Dragon Ball•°' timestamp='1292223697' post='4848580'] Im sure the [u]RIGHT[/u] OCG is ..... [i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle[/i] if not then im sorry [/quote] He's right y'know. Ok let's do a rating. Well it's pic is somewhat blurry (try using an pic that is larger then the borders on the card for best effect) and the name is unfitting, as it doesn't look insane at all, just fleeing for the explosions! About the effect, mhh, its almost ballanced, but just barely. It has some potential for swarming, but the part where it needs to attack makes up for that. A 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1292232656' post='4848675'] He's right y'know. Ok let's do a rating. Well it's pic is somewhat blurry (try using an pic that is larger then the borders on the card for best effect) and the name is unfitting, as it doesn't look insane at all, just fleeing for the explosions! About the effect, mhh, its almost ballanced, but just barely. It has some potential for swarming, but the part where it needs to attack makes up for that. A 6.9/10 [/quote] Are you still talking about that? I already said why I said that OCG fix and asked sorry to him. For God sake, read before you post!... -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Richard Steve' timestamp='1292235513' post='4848693'] Are you still talking about that? I already said why I said that OCG fix and asked sorry to him. For God sake, read before you post!... -.- [/quote] Lol, grumpy are we? And I've read the prev posts, and decided to add it aswell to make an full review. You should try it once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ярополк Пономарёв Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 It's a carbon copy of Turbo Synchron. Except for the Winged beast limitation and deck. [img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20081221185455/yugioh/images/4/42/TurboSynchronCSOC-EN-R-1E.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1292224067' post='4848586'] ...Who cares about OCG? Seriously? [/quote] You say who cares about OCG...but then comment on the pic? I mean i know you weren't giving it a rating or anything, but if u put more thought into what the pic is like then the OCG then no one's cardmaking abilities would improve. OCG is one of the, if not the, main aspect to look at when critiquing cards... Your card isn't bad, its original unique and nicly balanced, but would it be useful? You would no doubt take a lot of damage by way of this card unless you had like spirit barrier up, in which case the effect would be rendered useless, 7/10 not bad i like it but maybe try to make it a little more useful int hat it won't cost you so much damage? Just my opinion though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1292239703' post='4848723'] You say who cares about OCG...but then comment on the pic? I mean i know you weren't giving it a rating or anything, but if u put more thought into what the pic is like then the OCG then no one's cardmaking abilities would improve. OCG is one of the, if not the, main aspect to look at when critiquing cards...[/quote] I personally believe OCG is meaningless. Just a personal opinion. And stop with the "is". ...*Goes to edit noob tut* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I've fixed the picture so it is not blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 i liked it! OCG is not a 100% but is not wrong. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Thanks for commenting on it everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 W/ Red Nova and Shooting Star this card's playablility is low compared to Turbo Synchron. Turbo Synchron is much better for decks going for Nova or Shooting Star. Again though this card would be way usefull in Gusta again because Gusta are so adept to being sent to the Graveyard and they have such low ATK. Not as broken as that Golden Eagle card but still pretty close. Still Turbo is better in my opinion. Good Good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted December 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 Pretty good card, OCG is now good, and you found a nice picture. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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