Warrior of Solitude, An original By Bluster Soldier

[Ghoulish]

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[spoiler= Effect]
When this card is Summoned, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Once while this monster is on the field, you canTribute 1 monster you control to have this card gain ATK equal to half the tributed monster's Original ATK until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by way of battle, during your next Standby Phase you can Tribute 2 monsters you control to Special Summon this card with 1000 extra ATK, remove this card from play during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned from the Graveyard.[/spoiler][/center]

[DARKPLANT RISING]

Despite saying how OCG is so important your OCG is quite bad.

As for the card: It's a LV 8 EARTH Warrior, meaning it can benefit from Trade-In. That's one good thing for sure. Then again it has no summoning requirements OR conditions. This can be either seen as something good or bad. If it has no summoning requirements you can summon it in any way you want, but considering most high-level monsters are like that, it needs something shiny to get attention and be worth using...the fact it has no summoning conditions means it lacks the sheer speed of DAD and JD. So where's the shiny part about this card? As far as I can see, nothing. Let's take a look at its effects:
[b]When this card is Summoned, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. [/b]
Scrap Dragon is easier to summon and has a better effect. ±0 effects are generally good, but this isn't the best effect that activates upon summoning.
[b]Once while this monster is on the field, you canTribute 1 monster you control to have this card gain ATK equal to half the tributed monster's Original ATK until the End Phase. [/b]
A walking Gift of the Martyr that's halved. Sucks. Needs to at least have the increase go on forever.
[b]If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by way of battle, during your next Standby Phase you can Tribute 2 monsters you control to Special Summon this card with 1000 extra ATK, remove this card from play during the End Phase of the turn it was Summoned from the Graveyard.[/b]
Where should I start...hmm... First of all it's highly unlikely to be destroyed by battle, gifted it's a monster with 2500 ATK, and most high-ATK monsters in the meta also have destructive effects. Second, during your next Standby Phase? What stupid timing is that? At least make it the End Phase for Bottomless's sake. And what? Remove it from play during the End Phase of the turn it was summoned from the Graveyard? Aww, man. You don't want to have it be a toilet paper common in packs do you?
In short: Hideously underpowered. Stop nerfing it for no apparent reason. 6/10.

[Ghoulish]

K Most of that is based off your own opinion, which is fine. But that last line was not needed, I never talked it up, not once, so if your gonna post s*** like that then don't post at all.

also u go on about how i go on about ocg...i never said mine was perfect but hey if it needed to be improved then why didn't you supply a fix? Unless it didn't and if there are errors then they are nt severe enough to deem it bad.

[DARKPLANT RISING]

If you can't take constructive critisism you can't live here. It was your fault creating such a horribly underpowered card, and as much as people here tend to hate people who make things like that the original reason was you. Even if you aren't, you look like a failtroll.

Also, fix your normal grammar too.

And no, I'm not going to reply or even view this thread no matter how much you post in here from now on to bash me for all my stuff. I hate whiners, I hate internet wars, and I know you can't fix that little habit no matter how I pursuade you anyways.

[judedudemude]

tomato dude is right

i think this card is way op'ed

this card is like arm dragon lv 11 and dark arm dragon combined

(cuz of the effects)

it only takes 2 monster to summon this dude that a very easy summon best way

to make this balanced is add a few stars to it and or make it harder to summon

you give it a good try

[Ghoulish]

[quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292393476' post='4853988']
tomato dude is right

i think this card is way op'ed

this card is like arm dragon lv 11 and dark arm dragon combined

(cuz of the effects)

it only takes 2 monster to summon this dude that a very easy summon best way

to make this balanced is add a few stars to it and or make it harder to summon

you give it a good try
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.......he was saying its underpowered dude.... please don't comment based off what other people think make your own judgement and Evangelion is a troll who uses past arguments to cloud his judgement as shown in his first comment with things such as "Stop nerfing it for no apparent reason" which is why i went up him.

[judedudemude]

this card of yours do have similar effects to arm dragon lv and the dark arm dragon
and plus its a pretty easy summon basically because it can be summon easily makes its op
if you have the right four monsters in your hand this can be summon on the first turn

evil hero inferenty prodigy
dark grappler
lv5 dark monster
warrior of solitude
my own words nad no one else's

[Ghoulish]

[quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292719588' post='4863170']
this card of yours do have similar effects to arm dragon lv and the dark arm dragon
and plus its a pretty easy summon basically because it can be summon easily makes its op
if you have the right four monsters in your hand this can be summon on the first turn
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Thought I might quote that and leave it there thankyou for your opinions.