Dark Manticore of Lightning

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can Special Summon this card by tributing 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged-Beast Type monster you control. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard.

It's the evolved version of Manticore of Darkness.

[Ghoulish]

I'm not going to do my normal way of critiquing, I'm going to be a bit more harsh just for you and I think you know why,

Ridiculously Op'd. Not only that but you failed to do one of the most simplest things when making a Yu-Gi-Oh! Card, "Have it make sense".

You say "Special summon this card by "T"ributing 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type Monster you control"

Then you say "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon it."

.....okay so basically your saying, "don't bother discarding a card when its sent to the Graveyard because you can tribute a monster later" OR "Don't worry you can Special Summon this card if its sent from the Deck to the Graveyard by discarding 1 card."

Be specific in what you say, your whole attempt was to constantly have this card Special Summoned, it's both unoriginal, bland and Op'd. Your OCG isn't the worst and solid in most areas, I won't comment on the pic cause that's pointless, my advice would be to set restrictions eg: "If this card is destroyed by a card effect controlled by your opponent, You can Special Summon it during the End Phase of that turn by discarding 1 card." or "You can Special summon this card FROM YOUR HAND by Tributing 1 beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type monster you control." Without Specification rulings are made specific to that card so people know the limitations when using it.

It's nothing near special 5/10.

[Ghoulish]

I'm not going to do my normal way of critiquing, I'm going to be a bit more harsh just for you and I think you know why,

Ridiculously Op'd. Not only that but you failed to do one of the most simplest things when making a Yu-Gi-Oh! Card, "Have it make sense".

You say "Special summon this card by "T"ributing 1 Beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type Monster you control"

Then you say "When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon it."

.....okay so basically your saying, "don't bother discarding a card when its sent to the Graveyard because you can tribute a monster later" OR "Don't worry you can Special Summon this card if its sent from the Deck to the Graveyard by discarding 1 card."

Be specific in what you say, your whole attempt was to constantly have this card Special Summoned, it's both unoriginal, bland and Op'd. Your OCG isn't the worst and solid in most areas, I won't comment on the pic cause that's pointless, my advice would be to set restrictions eg: "If this card is destroyed by a card effect controlled by your opponent, You can Special Summon it during the End Phase of that turn by discarding 1 card." or "You can Special summon this card FROM YOUR HAND by Tributing 1 beast, Beast-Warrior or Winged Beast-Type monster you control." Without Specification rulings are made specific to that card so people know the limitations when using it.

It's nothing near special 5/10.

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[quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1292403095' post='4854090']I'm going to be a bit more harsh just for you and I think you know why[/quote]

Because I said your card was bad.

[Ghoulish]

lol no, because you were overly and unjustly harsh, whether you do that all the time or specifically to me I'm not sure also:

" If you can't take constructive critisism you can't live here. It was your fault creating such a horribly overrpowered card, and as much as people here tend to hate people who make things like that the original reason was you. Even if you aren't, you look like a failtroll.

And no, I'm not going to reply or even view this thread no matter how much you post in here from now on to bash me for all my stuff. I hate whiners, I hate internet wars, and I know you can't fix that little habit no matter how I pursuade you anyways. "

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[quote name='Bluster Soldier' timestamp='1292406300' post='4854109']lol no, because you were overly and unjustly harsh, whether you do that all the time or specifically to me I'm not sure[/quote]

I'm not picking on you, nor am I always like that. It's also a common mistake I like to flame and annoy others. It's just that I'm honest against cards I find "bad".

It's the difference of whether you accept it as critisizing or you throw it away as flaming that acts as the borderline between people I respect or not. Good members actualy care to listen no matter how stinging someone's tongue may be (and there are much worse people out there), while failtrolls throw it away.