Tyka Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 [center][/center][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7949/331248.jpg[/img] I'm new to the forums. I love the idea of creating my own Yu Gi Oh cards. Let me know what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 FIRST NO LORE must have lore second you did not add the sychro meterails third way to OP for my taste make it a lv 8 Dragon it gains 650 attack and defence points for every dragon on your side of the field in conculsion EPIC FAILURE please Pratice and buy some yugioh cards look at em see study and pratice is key Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyka Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Thanks for the input. I appreciate the tips, I will make changes and re-post later. The only thing I'd like to add is: if you critique other peoples work, you shouldn't degrade them. It's just rude. [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292392170' post='4853941'] FIRST NO LORE must have lore second you did not add the sychro meterails third way to OP for my taste make it a lv 8 Dragon it gains 650 attack and defence points for every dragon on your side of the field in conculsion EPIC FAILURE please Pratice and buy some yugioh cards look at em see study and pratice is key [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 i dont degrade degrading is what snobs do !!! i still pratice i look at all my cards i study and pratice it helps when you wanna make the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyka Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 [center][color="#FF0000"][size="6"]Tyka-Destroyer of Worlds[/size][/color][/center] [center][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/6361/331248s.jpg[/img] [/center] [center][size="4"]Lore 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters The ATK and DEF of this monster is 800 x the number of Dragon-Type monsters you control. Once per turn, you may remove from play one Dragon-Type monster from your hand to destroy any card on the field.[/size][/center] After careful consideration, I re-designed this card to be less over powered. I hope it looks better. Keep the feedback coming. I meant no disrespect or to accuse you of being a snob. The "EPIC FAILURE" remark just came off as degrading. Your inputs were helpful, thank you. [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292393921' post='4853997'] i dont degrade degrading is what snobs do !!! i still pratice i look at all my cards i study and pratice it helps when you wanna make the cards [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 pretty good when i mean lore i mean you put the effects of the card on the post so it can be read easily ex, pic of the pot of greed spell card lore draw 2 cards sorry if i confuse you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyka Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Oh, I get it now. haha Thanks [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292394777' post='4854015'] pretty good when i mean lore i mean you put the effects of the card on the post so it can be read easily ex, pic of the pot of greed spell card lore draw 2 cards sorry if i confuse you [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Underpowered. [b][color="#FF0000"]Hey, Kenta, it's a new generic Synchro monster! [/color] Yay! [color="#FF0000"]Wait, it's LV 8![/color] Wha-NOOOOO!!! [/b] Look at the world's generic LV 8 Synchros. Stardust. Dark-End. Thoughtruler. Scrap. Colossal. I can name a lot off the top of my head. As it turns out the typical Extra Deck doesn't have enough slots to have most new LV 8 stuff fit in. It all depends on the effect. If it sucks, we save it as toilet paper in case of natural disasters. If it's good, we place it in our Extra Deck over at least three card protectors. So let's look at the effect. [b]Tyka-Destroyer of Worlds Synchro/ LV 8/ DARK/ Dragon 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters The ATK and DEF of this monster is 800 x the number of Dragon-Type monsters you control. Once per turn, you may remove from play one Dragon-Type monster from your hand to destroy any card on the field.[/b] One thing I'm concerned about is the fact it's named Tyka. Tyka (大化) is the first era name used in Japanese history, coincidentally. Being Japanese myself, this is one thing I feel is special about this card. Then again the effect is pretty darn horrible. Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon (I'll abb. from now on) is a 2800 beatstick that can be easily summoned by a -1 hand cost, can bring +1 or +2 immidiatly, and can be abused with Future Fusion. The reason it's the core of most non-Dragunity Dragon decks of now. Since this card is harder to summon than REDMD, it has at least to go to 2800 easily. In order for this card to reach the rival here it has to have 3 other Dragons for supporting his fat legs. Tuning requires at least 2 monsters, and the deck should be dragon-dedicated, meaning it needs 5 dragons to reach a considerable ATK. Being like this it can never hope to even beat REDMD. He should forget about destroying the worlds and instead start living a peaceful life without war. Maybe the x800 part was the thing that killed it here. Let's return it to x1000 so it can start rampaging again. Dragons can flood, and it's normal to have 3 of them on the field. A BEWD with extra effects is nice. The destroying effect. Ah, I see, the destroying effect. Since Scrap Dragon has 2800 ATK from the start and it can have a destructive trade on its own, it should be better-except, wait no, it isn't. It can remove from play - WHAT!? Where's the effing dragon abuse - 1 Dragon from your hand to DAD once. Which isn't that good of a deal, since Scrap Dragon can trade anything with a destruction, and if you have leftover Dragon cards in your hand in a dragon deck you're doing it wrong. First of all, change the cost to discarding 1 card (yes, no requirements). The destroying thing is fine like that. So what do we have now after mass editing? [b]Tyka-Destroyer of Worlds Synchro/ LV 8/ DARK/ Dragon 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters The ATK and DEF of this monster is equal to the number of Dragon-Type monsters you control x1000. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on the field.[/b] It still doesn't even have a pinch of originality. But at least you didn't name it "Dark Dragon", which is pretty good for a new member, no sarcasm (my first card was named Po, Lord of Searing Flames. You know what I copied). The pic is quite overused by newbs. How about going to [url=http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay]Jazin Kay's Image Archives[/url] or [url=http://www.deviantart.com/?]deviantART[/url] for your pics instead of Google? Work more. Learn more. I'm sure you can become better. Keep trying. But try to listen to your mom about gaming time, YCM is purely addicting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 but using a card or monster that uses removed form play cards combined with this sychro can proved to be a usefull plan (alot of examples for cards that use removed form play) this card can be used in a removed form play kind of deck destorying opperents cards on the field and powering up other monster of yours that uses removed form play cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292720098' post='4863194'] but using a card or monster that uses removed form play cards combined with this sychro can proved to be a usefull plan (alot of examples for cards that use removed form play) this card can be used in a removed form play kind of deck destorying opperents cards on the field and powering up other monster of yours that uses removed form play cards [/quote] RFP decks need to be fast, so this slow effect fails there. Also they don't use many LV 8 Synchros because in order to do so they would need to use the Graveyard in some way or another. Also they shouldn't include Dragons unless they want to suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 how is discard 1 dragon type monster card from hand to the graveyard to destory 1 card on the field a slow effect with dimensional fissure then with nercoface on the field gre ryu ju on hte field the get more powerful with each card that is removed from played plus with this effect you can clear you opernet's side of the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 Alright first of all you don't have to write "lore" above the effect lol Everyone knows it's the effect so it doesn't matter, but generally posting the effect below the card is halpful and appreciated. I knwo you wrote the lore because of advice from someone else who sorta doesn't know what his talking about, anyway: OCG fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster[b]([/b]s[b])[/b] The ATK and DEF of this card/monster is [b]equal to [/b]800 x the number of Dragon-Type monsters |you control(<-Wow good job)|. Once per turn, you ([s]may[/s] "can") remove from play ([s]one[/s] "1" (always use numbers)) Dragon-Type monster from your hand to destroy [s]any[/s] [b]1[/b] card on the field. Balance: This card is very Underpowered, when you think about it, you may have used 2 maybe even 3 monsters for its summon, and I doubt you would have 5 monsters on the field right? or even 4 for that matter, and + with the rmeoving effect it will make it harder to get the Dragons on the field. I can see you tried to make it balance but maybe instead make the Original ATK and DEF of the card 1500, then include the effect of "This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for every Dragon-Type monster you control." That way while face-up it will have an ATK of 2000, then if you have an extra Dragon monster 2500, thereby strengthening it up in a balanced way. As for the other effect, maybe try to give a boost to the power. Picture: I never comment on the picture because that's just silly. Usefulness: When compared to existing Synchros and considering Deck types, not very at this point, if this was a Zombie it would be effective since alot of zombie decks are field swarm allowing for a big ATK boost. Name: Interesting and innovative for a new member Summary: Not bad, quite good and slightly original for a new member, keep creating cards and you'll improve dramatically, good job.[quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1292729318' post='4863491'] how is discard 1 dragon type monster card from hand to the graveyard to destory 1 card on the field a slow effect with dimensional fissure then with nercoface on the field gre ryu ju on hte field the get more powerful with each card that is removed from played plus with this effect you can clear you opernet's side of the field [/quote] your making it to situational you can't think of it like "what if you had this on the field" you have to think about it like "compared to the cost is the gain Opd". Sure you need to consider some cards thsat may well be ont he field, but you can't say what if you had this and this and this on the field plus an effect that did this, if you think this card is Op'd then you may want to loook again, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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