RAGNOROK6 Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 I made this card so that it would inspire mayhem in the general populus. If you like this card, Please know that this awsome image was m ade by Spikyball [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/415/199936.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikeball Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Hi there^^ Got here by your update and was surprised about the image xD So Zextra is your mentor? Veery good card creator - You'll improve a lot^^ You still have some OCG-problems - can you post the lore? I try and correct it^^ However, numbers like "one" or "two" are written as "1", "2", etc... The card is pretty OPed since it has various strong effects that throw the game into chaos >.< then again - the name is distortion field xD anyway - this card would be at least limited... I would remove some of the effects (like the "return removed from play card"-part) and I think it would be good if you look at some of the card lores in YGO wiki - it will improve your feeling for the OCG and balance^^ good choice of pic of course xD if you want to have a special image just tell me^^ I'll do it for free Good luck here^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Hey, the image is cool but the OCG is, honestly, bad. ATK and DEF (not attack and defense), types are written in capital letters (Spellcaster-Type), field is written field, not feild. But the effect is also OP. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAGNOROK6 Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 [quote name='Spikeball' timestamp='1292442970' post='4854865'] Hi there^^ Got here by your update and was surprised about the image xD So Zextra is your mentor? Veery good card creator - You'll improve a lot^^ You still have some OCG-problems - can you post the lore? I try and correct it^^ However, numbers like "one" or "two" are written as "1", "2", etc... The card is pretty OPed since it has various strong effects that throw the game into chaos >.< then again - the name is distortion field xD anyway - this card would be at least limited... I would remove some of the effects (like the "return removed from play card"-part) and I think it would be good if you look at some of the card lores in YGO wiki - it will improve your feeling for the OCG and balance^^ good choice of pic of course xD if you want to have a special image just tell me^^ I'll do it for free Good luck here^^ [/quote] Thanks! I'll post the lore soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Don't ingore the people who just gave you feedback on the card!!! Like Warchess said, Fix all the OCG errors you have, You also spelled field wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAGNOROK6 Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 [quote name='Demon wolf' timestamp='1292447892' post='4855110'] Don't ingore the people who just gave you feedback on the card!!! Like Warchess said, Fix all the OCG errors you have, You also spelled field wrong [/quote] My computer's having trouble, so i cant fix it right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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