Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 [size="4"]Lore:[/size] [size="3"]This card cannot be special summoned. When this card is summoned destroy all monster on your oppents side of the field. When this card is face up on the field no trap cards can be activated. [img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/9936/330701.jpg[/img][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Paste lore down for cards so I can see the effects easier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I cant my Paste and Copy is broken... but i can copy brb....I type it their are the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 There are many OCG errors I don't want to bother with. Over all, why have LV. cards for a phoenix in the first place?? Just make 1 epic Flaming Phoenix card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Flare Phoenix I was inspired by Hotus, the black flame dragons lv. 10OCG errors What are the Errors and what is OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Well if its your idea and you like it don't change it. OCG is Official Card Grammar. Heres the OCG fix for the first card: (The bolded parts are what you didn't do right.) Lore: This card cannot be [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned. [b]During your Standby Phase, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Flare Phoenix Lv. 5" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 End Phase you can do to......but ok.....i will switch...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Your Level 3 phoenix is actually Level 1 The effect is fairly good, but needs to be written in the right way. The pictures are pretty awful, but you could make them into great cards with a bit more work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Pl these where the best pics i could find..... i suck at finding pics...and making them.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Look on a site called deviantart, they have some excellent artists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Ok i will thanks........hermal Are you a artist maybe you could make one....srry thermsticSrry i suck at typing ....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 maybe this for 1 of them? [url="http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=phoenix&order=9&offset=96#/d27dtl6"]http://browse.devian...set=96#/d27dtl6[/url] this for your level 3 one? [url="http://o-eternal-o.deviantart.com/#/d2dd25t"]http://o-eternal-o.d...t.com/#/d2dd25t[/url] just use the pictures, i do signatures, but im not as great as I'd like to be, besides it would take forever to start from scratch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Maybe i would like more of orange though..... but this pic i can use for a difernt card Ice Phoenix and Fire phoenix and use it as a fusion card... I have Decided to mahe Flare Phoenix 1 card...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Ok - its up to you, they might not be what your looking for, but its still an improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 LOL I found a new Look at the pic its awesome Look at the new pic hope you like.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Its a cool picture, but the effect is overpowered and your grammar could use a little TLC. But keep working at it, a card with a name like 'Flare Phoenix' is destined for success. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 I Suck at grammer i failing it right now.......... I will under power it.....New effect This card cannot be special summoned. When this card is normal summoned destroy all monster on your oppents side of the field. When this card is face up on the field no trap cards can be activated during your battle phase.Every time i try to post the new card effect its keep on getting the old one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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