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Gospel. Newbie

Gospel.

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[center]After looking through the forum I think i've got a decent idea of the criteria but please give me guidance and support.[/center]

[center][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9238/331207.jpg[/img][/center]
[center]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Fiend-Type Monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent, remove from play 3 level 5 or lower Monsters in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total level of each Monster removed x100. [/center]
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The Sleeping Dude Newbie

The Sleeping Dude

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possible OCG fixes:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Fiend-Type [s]Monsters [/s] [b]monsters[/b] from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent[b]'s Life Points[/b], remove from play all DARK Fiend-Type[s] Monsters [/s] [b]monsters[/b] in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent[b]'s Life Points[/b] equal to the total level of each [s]Monster[/s] [b]monsters[/b] removed [b]from play by this effect x 100. [/b][s]This effect can only be used once.[/s][b]You can only activate this effect once per turn.[/b]
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Gospel. Newbie

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[quote name='ks2ill34' timestamp='1292486877' post='4856548']
possible OCG fixes:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Fiend-Type [s]Monsters [/s] [b]monsters[/b] from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent[b]'s Life Points[/b], remove from play all DARK Fiend-Type[s] Monsters [/s] [b]monsters[/b] in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent[b]'s Life Points[/b] equal to the total level of each [s]Monster[/s] [b]monsters[/b] removed [b]from play by this effect x 100. [/b][s]This effect can only be used once.[/s][b]You can only activate this effect once per turn.[/b]
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thanks dude. :)

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Ghoulish Newbie

Ghoulish

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yea the OCG fix was a bit off "Life Points" when concerning the opponent, shouldnt be mentiond "inflict damage to your opponent" is the correct phrase. Not bad ur a new memebr and have borderline solid OCG a reasonably original effect, it is however very situational in terms fo what your opponent has, may be quite Underpowered, i suggest change the effect to all non fiend type monetsers, however that may make it Op'd so try to find a balance but other then that good for a new member especially. well done.
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DARKPLANT RISING Newbie

DARKPLANT RISING

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[b]Mors Mortis - Death Incarnate
LV 6 DARK Fiend Effect
2000/2100
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Fiend-Type Monsters from your Graveyard. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent, remove from play all DARK Fiend-Type Monsters in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total level of each Monster removed x100. This effect can only be used once.[/b]

I see. The pic is awesome and I've never seen it before. Nice.

The summoning conditions are quite easy. Dark Necrofear is simular, but this can be summoned in more situations. That's nice. But it's still a hard choice, and since it has only 2000 ATK it must have a good effect...

Except it doesn't.

"When this card inflicts damage to your opponent, remove from play all DARK Fiend-Type Monsters in your opponent's Graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total level of each Monster removed x100. This effect can only be used once". Really? Is that all? Surely it can't be - *Checks* Whatever.

Well, this thing is pretty underpowered. The chances the opponent even USES DARK Fiend-Type monsters are very thin. Of course this can be devastating for Fabled decks that use the Graveyard's monsters. But this isn't even good as a Side. There are better choices.

So I think it should be edited so it removes from play 3 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard (without restrictions). And the u-can-only-use-this-once-lololololol effect is unneeded.

But I mean, you're still pro at this stuff as a newb. Your first card is like this? Much better than mine. "Po, Lord of Searing Flames". See?

8/10 with newby bonus. I think that if you learn more, you can become seriously awesome.
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Smesh Newbie

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The force is strong in this newb.

It's an ok card. Situational, but it's good for a new guy. Pic is epic.

The effect could be spruced up to be more burny IMO. Chances are, you'll get a 1000 burn the turn it's Summoned, and from then on, you're just getting a 200 Burn.
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Lexadin Newbie

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Come on what is wrong with your judgment guys!

Seriously, it's OP. Not UP OP!!!

Well let me explain. 1st of all, it really easy to Summon, only 2 monsters are needed, secondly it's a Special Summon which gives it the power to do that anytime you want.

Then there's the Burn effect, not that treatening at 1st glans, however it also clears your opps Grave from basicly any flodder/material monsters, which is devistating to basicly all Decks. Especially in today's Meta.

However there's also a good side, this is one of the best Death imgs I've seen here on YCM (which says a lot).

Overal a 7/10
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