Gospel. Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 [center][img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9238/331207.jpg[/img][/center] [center]posting lore.[/center] [center]When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, place 1 "Lust Counter" on it (MAX. 4). By removing from play 4 Lust Counters on this card, draw 2 cards. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that Monster's ATK. [/center] [center]Couldnt really figure out how I could word the effect clearly (specifcally the last sentence) so help me out.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon wolf Posted December 16, 2010 Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 It shouldn't be zero, it should be 1000, It would be patcialy weak if you use the effect like that. 7/10 Fix it And I will make it a 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 well there you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 comments? fixes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 bu-bu-bu-buuuuuummmmmpppp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I am Fate. Embrace me. Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Not bad... Is this supposed to be a start to a Seven Deadly Sins set? Lust IS one of them, you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Nice balanced effect Great Pic... 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 [quote name='The Duel Destroyer' timestamp='1292562684' post='4858720'] Not bad... [b]Is this supposed to be a start to a Seven Deadly Sins set?[/b] Lust IS one of them, you know. [/quote] no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Wow, that's really good for a beginner! Only 1 error; you didn't capitalize graveyard at the beginning. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Okay... [b]Samayaza, the Deification of Lust LV 8 DARK Warrior Effect 2800/2500 When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, reduce its ATK by 400. When this card's ATK becomes 1200, draw 2 cards. If one of the cards is a Warrior-Type Monster, pay 700 Life Points to inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that Monster's ATK. This card is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated.[/b] ...*Looks up at what "Deification" means* Your vocabulary is awesome. The pic is a bit overused. Now onto the effect. Um...? Each time it kills it becomes weakened? But hey, when it kils 4 monsters it can be a walking Pot of Greed. And what? If it kills a warrior you can pay 700 to burn...except this dies. That's quite horrible, no offense. But still it's awesome for a newb. How about something like this instead? Samayaza, the Deification of Lust LV 8 DARK Warrior Effect 2800/2500 When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, [b]place 1 "Lust Counter" on it (MAX. 4)[/b]. [b]By removing from play 4 Lust Counters on this card,[/b] draw 2 cards. [b]When this card destroys a monster by battle, [/b] inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that Monster's ATK. Well, right now 8/10 with newby bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 nice card but ATK reduction makes it weak in offense try evangelion's suggested effect but overall the effect is very original and the pic is good but already saw this pic used Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gospel. Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1292585371' post='4858969'] Okay... [b]Samayaza, the Deification of Lust LV 8 DARK Warrior Effect 2800/2500 When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, reduce its ATK by 400. When this card's ATK becomes 1200, draw 2 cards. If one of the cards is a Warrior-Type Monster, pay 700 Life Points to inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that Monster's ATK. This card is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated.[/b] ...*Looks up at what "Deification" means* Your vocabulary is awesome. The pic is a bit overused. Now onto the effect. Um...? Each time it kills it becomes weakened? But hey, when it kils 4 monsters it can be a walking Pot of Greed. And what? If it kills a warrior you can pay 700 to burn...except this dies. That's quite horrible, no offense. But still it's awesome for a newb. How about something like this instead? Samayaza, the Deification of Lust LV 8 DARK Warrior Effect 2800/2500 When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the graveyard, [b]place 1 "Lust Counter" on it (MAX. 4)[/b]. [b]By removing from play 4 Lust Counters on this card,[/b] draw 2 cards. [b]When this card destroys a monster by battle, [/b] inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that Monster's ATK. Well, right now 8/10 with newby bonus. [/quote] okay. I like that. Thanks Okay, updated it with Evangelions recomended effect (you the man.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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