My First Spell Card

[Heavens Guardian]

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Lore:
Increase ATK and DEF of all "Destron" monsters by 200. If there is a "Destron" monster on the field, Spell or Trap Cards cannot be activated on your opponent's side of the field. When this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters on the field.





I worked Hard On this plz rveiw and reply...

[~{Rochster}~]

OCG fix: Increase ATK and DEF of all [b]"[/b]Destron[b]"[/b] [b]m[/b]onsters by 200. (you forgot to put a space)If there is a [b]"[/b]Destron[b]"[/b] monster on the field[b],[/b] [b]Spell[/b] or [b]Trap[/b] (usually how the order is) [b]C[/b]ards cannot be activated on your opponent[b]'[/b]s side of the field. When this card is destroyed[b],[/b] destroy all monster[b]s[/b] on the field.
Since this is your first spell, 7/10.

[The Sleeping Dude]

Original Lore:
Increase ATK and DEF of all Destron Monsters by 200 Points.If there is a Destron monster on the field trap or spell cards cannot be activated on your opponents side of the field. When this card is destroyed destroy all monster on the field.
Suggested Lore:All "Destron" monsters gains ATK and DEF. If there is a face-up "Destron" monster on the field, Neither player can activate Spell and Trap cards. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Destron" monster from your Graveyard.
OP'd try my suggested lore it might balance it a little
8.5/10

[Heavens Guardian]

Thanx I deleted my draon because i saw errors so i deleted it( i still have it in creator)

[The Sleeping Dude]

Original Lore:
When this card is summoned and Destron is in play
destroy one monster on your opponet'sside of the field.

Suggested Lore:
When this card is Summoned and a Destron is face-up on the field, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls.

[~{Rochster}~]

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Suggested Lore:All "Destron" monsters gains ATK and DEF. If there is a face-up "Destron" monster on the field, Neither player can activate Spell and Trap cards. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Destron" monster from your Graveyard.
OP'd try my suggested lore it might balance it a little
8.5/10
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Umm, grammar fail? How much AYK do they gain? The other effect is better.

[The Sleeping Dude]

rating of the destron monster
7/10