An Idea that needs improvement I think

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Well, here's a new card. I like this idea, I think it is playable right now but we shall see.

[spoiler='Original'][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/1019/264408t.jpg[/img]

You do not have to pay Life Points to activate a card effect. Each time you activate a card effect that requires you to pay Life Points, place 1 Tariff Counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, inflict damage to your Life Points equal to the number of Tariff Counters on this card x 800.

Problems I have at the moment:
1. It might be OP'd
2. Lame name is lame
3. I might make it Continuous Spell instead for speed/playability since I see a lot of Royal Decree
4. OCG I think is off some, but I'm rusty lately.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Update']
[img]http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/6622/264408.jpg[/img]

You do not have to pay Life Points to activate a card effect. Each time you activate a card effect that requires you to pay Life Points, place 1 Tariff Counter on this card for every 500 Life Points that you would have paid. This effect can only be used once per turn per card. When this card is removed from the field, take damage equal to the number of Tariff Counters on this card x 500.


Still worried about OCG...other than that though I'm happy with it.[/spoiler]

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Good card, makes cards like Gale Dogra, Ultimate Offering, Toll etc a lot more dangerous/annoying.

Speaking of Gale Dogra, that has 3000 LP cost, yet you can reduce this to just 800 with this. Maybe it would be fairer if you kept at a running total of the costs you should have paid, and then when the cards destroyed take damage equal to x1.5 or x2 that number. Like accumulating interest, the longer you delay payment, the more you have to pay in the end.

Pic fits well, dunno what to suggest for name. Think Decree should stay in some capacity. Maybe a Spell would be better to.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

I was thinking about bumping up the damage, but I complete forgot about Gale Dogra...well, I'll definitely consider an update. Like I said, I was also considering making this a Spell too...thanks for the feedback ^^

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

Maybe keep the damage the same but you place one counter for every 1000 payed... anything below 1000 means one counter?

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

hmm, that's an idea. I'll definitely consider it. I'm remaking the card right now.

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

ok ill add feedback on the new card

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Alright, I updated the card. I made it a Spell and I edited the effect, including getting rid of an abuse clause I forgot about. My original said "destroyed" whereas the new one says "removed from the field", that way you can't Giant Trunade your way to a free super combo.

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

i have one question... why are you taking damage? i thought you meant that you deal damage to you opponet equal to 500x the counters.. whats the point of hurting yourself?

never mind i understand now... i like it alot more that i understand!

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

It's to keep it balanced. Let's say I played [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Cyber-Stein"]Cyber-Stein[/url] and activated his effect. Usually I would lose 5000 LP, but with my card on the field I wouldn't lose any. Instead it would all be transferred into this card. However, when this card is destroyed, the damage returns to you. If you accumulated a lot of Counters, you'll probably lose. However, this card allows you to play effects like Cyber-Stein even when you don't have enough LP. Solemns just got better.

While typing this, I now realize that this should be Once per turn per card. Otherwise Cyber-Stein and Demise would have a field day.

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

i see... i like it... i might print if off and use it againt my brother lol

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Updated again to include the new stipulation.

Edit: Feel free to if you like it that much ^^

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

10/10 i like it

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Thanks a lot dtw ^^

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

welcome u deserve it... plus this rep for being awesome

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Thanks very much

[вєgσттєη ιηѕαηιту]

welcome.. im in a very good mood... if u ever want help on a card pm me... i get lonely and bored...

[Jack of All Spades]

Effect is similar to "Giant Trunade" and "Ultimate Offering"...I LIKE!
8/10

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Thank you kindly Some Guy ^^

@dtw, I might take you up on that offer sometime.

[Smesh]

Archfiends love this. And I wouldn't say it's OP'd, cause it's not something everyone would have in their Deck. Ex: almost everyone uses Solemn, but not all decks have room for a card like this. A Deck could easily be built around this.

Idk I explained that well, but it's a good card.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Thanks Smesh ^^ It was a good explanation.

[.Ash]

It's good. Like Smesh said, it protects you from the effects of Solemns and such high cost cards, as well as helping things such as Cyber-Stein, like you said although Demise would still deal damage anyway. It's good in theory, just not very splashable. It has got its uses, but it's not particularly staple-worthy - at least not to the same extent as Solemn Judgment/Warning etc.

It gets a good rate from me anyway. 8/10

Also reminds me of this:
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Spell_Economics"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Spell_Economics[/url]

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

No, it isn't very splashable, but very support cards are. Thanks for the review Skizo ^^

PS It's based off of Spell Economics. I updated it to make it more useful.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Bump.

[Archwing]

Name:....... I think ive seen it somewhere before but i cant remember where Q_Q Anyway sounds like a real cards name so 8.5/10
Pic: I like it 8/10
OCG:Looks fine.....
Effect: Well the effect is good but yeah, the updated one is better, its balanced and seems more realistic
Balance: Good on the updated one
The little Extras: No editon How could you! Q_Q [size="1"]Jk[/size]
Overall: [size="4"][color="#0000FF"]B+[/color][/size] A great card, nothing i can think of to improve it really...... The only reason its only a B+ is because i dont feel right giving a single magic card the same grade as a whole set of cards, yah know?
Anyway great job~

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Well, there are a few Decrees out there and Tariff is a term for tax basically. It's a bit more extreme than your usual tax but it is what it is.

I'm happy with good rating ^^ and I was too busy (lazy) to put 1st Edition on it lol