Hydrophilous Entity Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 [center][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/7686/333392.jpg[/img] This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by sending 1 face up "Umi" you control to the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase you can send 2 cards from the top of your deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard. It is destroyed during the End Phase. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster from their hand in face up attack position. This card can then attack the Summoned monster[/center] It's my first so please be nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Not bad at all. Just put a comma after Standby Phase and "your opponent". Also, instead of putting your opponent twice, put he/she or just he. There isn't a period at the end. NEWBIE BONUS!!! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 18, 2010 Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Really good for first card good OCG so 9/ 10 just a few minor mistake way better the me and this is your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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