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[Mitchell7]

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[Face McShooty]

I'm sorry but it's BEYOND broken
first, the image is of the Egyptian Gods
second, no ATK or DEF
third, it being such a high level and only needing one sacrifice? WAY TOO BROKEN
"Steals an opponent's monsters soul"? wtf???
on top of having this on the field, you can bring another dragon to the field? you didn't specify what level
and please... DON'T PRESS ENTER... just use the SPACE BAR between effects
and whats with the "CANNOT BE NEGATED OR DESTROYED IN BATTLE"? its not necessary
0/10

[Heavens Guardian]

Way to powerful 7 or lower wow and bad OCG but you are new so i will give 1/10 but no - rep

[Mugendramon]

Don't bugger him off. This is his first post.

Look, person. Welcome to YCM. In his site, people actually expect you to make cards that would actually fit as real Yugioh cards. Because of this, the best way to improve is to see real cards [color="#000000"][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page"][color="#000000"]here,[/color][/url] to try and type in a way similar to them. By looking at Archtypes, you could even get ideas on how to make your own sets. This card, I'm sorry to tell you, makes absolutely no sense.[/color]
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[color="#000000"]First of all, the kind of card the color suggests is a the one of a [/color][color="#000000"][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Synchro_Monster"][color="#000000"]Synchro Monster[/color][/url]. Read that page, and you'll understand how should it work. [/color]
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[color="#000000"]Second, you should learn how to Capitalize in your effects, and Names. This is where actual cards help you. See which words are capitalized in real cards, and copy that.[/color]
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[color="#000000"]Finally, try to make the image you use fit the name you write. Otherwise people will doubt on your ability.[/color]
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[color="#000000"]I hope this has helped you.[/color]