FANTASIA COLLECTION

[AbbatonStrikes]

[center][font="Georgia"][color="#800080"][size="3"]I started making these yesterday and had a few ideas that I hope work well. Im trying to make a set thats a lil different but is still very useable. Im going to make a few other Attribute but the DARK ones I have begun with. Hope you like em people!! As always rate, comment and corrections welcome from everyone...enjoy!! -Abb[/size][/color]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Raine, Dark Queen of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4743/123878c.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Spirit monsters do not return to their owner's hand during the End Phase even if they are Summoned or flipped face-up. While you control at least 1 other DARK "Fantasia" monster on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, all Spirit monsters return to their owners' hand.[/size]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Juri, Brawler of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6606/123878.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, double the ATK of this card during the Damage Step only.[/size]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Paine, Assassin of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6606/123878.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[/size]


[color="#800080"][size="4"]Bella, Reaper of Fantasia[/size][/color]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2483/123878n.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: "Morgan, Dark Angel of Fantasia" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card returns to its owner's Extra Deck during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's DEF. If this monster is returned to your Extra Deck by its own effect, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. [/size]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Morgan, Dark Angel of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/6606/123878.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: If you control at least 1 face-up DARK "Fantasia" Spirit Monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by sending 1 non-DARK "Fantasia" monster from your hand to your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. [/size]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Asura, Warlord of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5057/123878j.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: "Morgan, Dark Angel of Fantasia" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
This card returns to its owner's Extra Deck during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Synchro Summoned, Special Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy the monster immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. If this monster is returned to your Extra Deck by its own effect, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. [/size]


[size="4"][color="#800080"]Mandy, Dark Agent of Fantasia[/color][/size]
[img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/6606/123878.jpg[/img]

[size="2"]EFFECT: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to its owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. [/size]


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[eldest]

Nice cards. OCg correct a and good images. Quite balanced.
8.5/10

[Prince of Ravens]

Excellent cards good OCG ETC. 9/10

[AbbatonStrikes]

Thanks eldest for the 8.5. I saw your Esper saet in the Pop culture Section, they look amazing...havent had a chance to read the effects yet but I will get round to it!!

[AbbatonStrikes]

Oh sorry Prince of Ravens thank you for the 9/10 and the nice comments really greatful. Keep em coming people!! I will be adding another card very soon

[AbbatonStrikes]

Edited Morgan and Bella. New card added - Paine, Assassin of Fantasia

[Heavens Guardian]

Great cards

Balanced
Effive
great PIcs

10/10

= Rep

[The8thEvilEx]

Very Nice 9/10 Has the makings for a very good deck if you can make all of those cards

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Morgan might seem too strong, but I don't think there are any other Fantasia monsters yet, and if these are the only it's unplayable. But even if there were other Fantasia monsters, you get to Special Summon Morgan AND recycle a monster from the Graveyard, that just seems OP'd, even if it can't be a DARK monster.

Also, I wanna know where you got the pic for Paine, it looks just like the style of the other two but I know for a fact that the person who made the other two pics didn't make the first one.

[Richard Steve]

I give it a 9/10, you have a correct and fine OCG, which is rare nowadays in these forums, and your effects are quite balanced and amazing.
Pictures are ok.

So, overall marks, it's a perfect score.
EDIT: gave you rep

[AbbatonStrikes]

Thanks Maple for the 10/10 and the Rep greatly recieved!! Haha thanks The8thEvilEx...Im trying but Im not rushing em, gonna make ones when I get an idea and abit of free time. Like the screen name fan of Scott Pilgrim lol?? A big thanks to you too Richard Steve for the 9/10, the Rep and the smiley face. I try very hard with the OCG and read my cards a few times and read real cards to make it sound good. Thanks for your comment Metagross386 Im doing these cards a few at a time when I have an idea I like for em, its also pretty hard to make Spirit Monster effects that work together as they wont be on the field together very often but the whole Deck has to fit.

The reason I made Morgan like that is you cant Special Summon Spirit Monsters its the first line of there text so you cant recycke them making it harder and also the Spirit monsters return to your hand so getting Morgan and a non-Tuner together would be harder to do too. I hope this explains why the card is like that for you bossman and thanks again for your input

PS
Im sorry I forgot where I got the pic of Paine it was on one of my picture hunting trips on the world wide web lol

[endphase]

Great Cards!
The pictures are awesome! The effects are original, but the ATK of "Paine, Assassin of Fantasia" is not enough.

Excellent 9,5/10

[Dearg Doom]

Nice pics, cool effects. Nice cards 10/10

[AbbatonStrikes]

Thanks endphase...do you really think it needs putting up? I thought that was just right for a level 3 monster esspecially as it wont be destroyed by battle being its a Spirit Monster and will return to your hand in the End Phase. I will have a lil think about it though and cheers for the 9.5/10!!

Dr.Random...thanks for the 10/10...I dont get too many of them I havea few more cards to come so keep your eyes peeled. anymore for anymore comments??

[endphase]

Yes, I know it returns to your hand in the End Phase, and that's just what I mean. If it returns back to your hand, and if you don't have other monsters, your opponent can attack you directly. So, you have to raise the ATK of "Paine, Assassin of Fantasia" because you can't win a duel with that less ATK. Just an ATK of 1700 or 1800 (not higher, because then, it would be overpowered).

[AbbatonStrikes]

Thanks for the advice I'll up it to 1600 ATK otherwise i think it will be overpowered with anymore and I dont want to make it a Level 4. Ill be putting up a new card today too. Juri, Brawler of Fantasia - I tried to get the text to go all the way along but it didnt...damn card generator lol. Hope you all like it

[CDDRodrigo]

Morgan effect is strange: shouldn't it be sending from hand to grave instead of from grave to hand? Otherwise, awesome set. 9,5/10

[AbbatonStrikes]

Should it?? I thought that was the way it was meant to be set out...anyone else know which way round its meant to be or is it varied? Thanks CDDRodrigo for the comment/edit and the 9.5/10. Cyber Dark Dragon, its a shame they never made more of them I always liked em.

[CDDRodrigo]

Aww, it was my mistake. The OCG is wrong, but nothing worrying. I read wrongly too >.<

It should be sending from hand to grave.

[AbbatonStrikes]

Thanks again CDDRodrigo I edited Morgan so she is now the right way round and Paine's ATK has been up'd from 1300 to 1600.

I was wondering if anyone is good at doing holos its just I would like one done for my first card that I'll be putting up very soon!!?

Hope you all like Juri too...only a few more DARK cards then moving onto LIGHT monsters.

[AbbatonStrikes]

New card Added Raine, Dark Queen of Fantasia. I hope you all like it and noticed why she is called Raine. If anyone would like to make a holo of her for me PM me or leave a lil comment underneath...+reps and points for someone that takes the time to make it for me.

[AbbatonStrikes]

BUMP!!...new cards on the way. Anyone know of any good holo people as I said above +rep and points for anyne that takes the time to make it for me.

[AbbatonStrikes]

New Cards added...DARK cards almost done 1 more to go then LIGHT, FIRE and EARTH

hope you like em please do comment rate amd correct people all veiws are welcome!! Still after a Holo of Raine if anyone is game to do it for me.