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Zinodin

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Sooo..... this is gonna be my third try for a set. Please rate and comment.




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[color="#00BFFF"]Water[/color][/center][/b][/i][/u][/font][/size]


[spoiler=Water Monsters][spoiler=Water Hunter][img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/7900/74750c.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water Warrior][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water Beast Lv.6][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water Beast Lv.8][img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water Dragon][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water Mystic - Aquatica][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7629/74750e.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Water God - Neptune][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2995/74750y.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler]




[center][color="#FF0000"][font="Impact"][u][i][b][size="6"]Fire[/size][/b][/i][/u][/font][/color][/center]
[spoiler=Fire Monsters][spoiler=Fire Beast][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/1540/74750q.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Fire Dragon][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9030/74750o.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Fire Warrior][img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/2686/74750x.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Fire Hunter][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Fire Mystic - Kita][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6923/74750k.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Fire God - Satan][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler]




[i][b][color="#008000"][size="6"][font="Arial Black"][center]Earth[/center][/font][/size][/color][/b][/i]
[spoiler=Earth Cards][spoiler=Earth Beast][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/6043/74750m.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Earth Dragon][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4047/74750i.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Earth Warrior][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9030/74750o.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Earth Hunter][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Earth Mystic - Michael][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Earth God - Gorgar][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8694/74750.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/spoiler]
[center]Soon to come: Air Cards[/center]


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Nice set.

Remember when you're talking about attributes you just say "WATER" (in all caps), not "water type"

The cards were all pretty balanced except for the last card... 2 tributes with 4000 ATK :blink: . And you know you can summon that so easily with birthright, swing of memories, etc. right?

Overall 8/10

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  • 3 weeks later...
Added Fire!!! Sorry for the wait guys. these are the fire cards and soon to come are the earth cards. BTW i need some help on the spells and traps so if anyone would be so good to PM me and ill tell you the details.

Oh and please tell me the mistakes so i can make a big edit. Comment and rate please. Thanx!
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[b][color=blue]Water Archetype Review[/color][/b]
First off, couldn't you think of a better name at the least? Like, Watereans or something. Also, after quickly skimming, there is a lot of OCG errors [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]this[/url] link should help you out if your a beginner to Card Making / YGO as a whole. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162252-commonly-used-ocg-phrases/"]This[/url] thread as well. Anyways, I can clearly see that they have a Phase / Life Point strategy, which gives them potential to be used in other Decks for stall, for gaining even the smallest amount of Life Points can build up overtime with the correct cards paired up with them, pissing off your opponent. However, some of their other Phase effects such as ones that happen during the Draw Phase are far too powerful, with no drawbacks whatsoever. They also somewhat lack in Synergy, for even though they help you, not much of them help each other. Also, what is with the random Vanilla? Vanilla's / Normal Monsters are useless without support. Anyways, the 'Archetype' needs lots of improvement, but is alright for a beginner. Another tip, try looking for better images. Lots of Archives are in YCM. Overall, [b]1.7/10[/b]

[b][color=blue]Fire Archetype Review[/color][/b]
To be added sooner or later.
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