Mitchell7 Posted December 19, 2010 Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2cylg5f.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLegenderyKingVildeChaya Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 1.7/10 the pic has black on the bottom, FIRE isn't a type, whats that * doing in middle of the text, and why is the ATK/DEF X000/X000 according to the effect it should be 0/0 and the OCG is wrong I know this is probably your first or 2nd but it SUCKS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 2/10 Good Pic Where Are The Monster to Summon it and Need Better OCG As well Deal 5000 damage meas u win Wat to power full Need atack the effect doesn't say How he gains its attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I am Fate. Embrace me. Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Tut tut tut... I'm a newb here and even I know that's not right. It sucks. Sorry, but it's just a fact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I am Fate. Embrace me. Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Tut tut tut... I'm a newb here and even I know that's not right. It sucks. Sorry, but it's just a fact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 come back hen you learn how to play yugioh (unless that was a joke card XD) ALSO ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO BE DESTROYED BY BATTLE ON AN END PHASE!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Indignation211 Posted December 21, 2010 Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Its a good start, but it needs some work. Here are my suggestions: 1. Change its type to Pyro; as others have said Fire isnt a type. 2. Change it from a Spirit Monster to an Effect Monster; Spirits return to the Hand during the End Phase and I don't think that's what you want with this card- plus being a Synchro Monster it would go back to the Extra Deck since it can't exist in the Hand. 3. Add the line: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters (Its a Synchro Monster- so Synchro Material monsters need to be listed) 4. Change the effect to: "If this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during the End Phase and inflict 5000 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points." 5. Its ATK and DEF need to be defined. X000 is not an actual number, im assuming you got that from Slifer the Sky Dragon. Being a level 12 Synchro Monster I would say somewhere around 4000 for each. Id rate the current version a 5/10. A new version using my changes would be rated at least an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pyrowiz23 Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 my cards suck, but man..... you messed up big time on that card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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