My Excess Monster Attempt, Crystillic Thunder King by Bluster Soldier

[Ghoulish]

[center][size="3"]So this is my first attempt at an Excess Monster, OCG wise I'm not to sure how it is, also I'm not even sure if the effect is appropriate, if anyone knows then could you please tell me what's good about it and what needs improvement.[/size]


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When this card is Excess Summoned, you can treat 1 other monster you control as an overlaid monster. All overlaid monsters on this card are treated as Thunder-Type monsters. Whenever an overlaid Thunder-Type monster is removed from the field, inflict damage equal to the number of overlaid monsters on the field x 400 to your opponent.[/spoiler][/center]

[Ghoulish]

not 1 comment.....really? ffs

[Ghoulish]

bump

[judedudemude]

this excess monster i can understand

so if you have 2 excess monster the can overlaid each other ??

i came up with a removed form play spirit card set (really dont know what to called it yet) its different

[Ghoulish]

bump any comment for my first excess monster

[Lord Metallium]

The card is good but change the effect i mean overlaid monsters i never heard of that before so you get the idea anyway this is my rate 8/10.

[Ghoulish]

thx for the comment and rate man, but overlaid monsters is a new term associated with Excess monsters