Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 This Is A New card I made Hope U Like. [img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/9936/330701.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 10 Fire monsters from your hand, Deck and Field. When this card is Special Summoned destroy all monsters on the Field and in your opponents hand. At the End Phase remove this card from play.This card may attack on the first turn it is summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 This card is OP and you didn't type some letters, and there are some OCG mistakes. But I think that if you fix it, it would be good. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 k thanx let me fix it...I Fixed It Now rated it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Not as OP as u think Fixed This [color="#0000FF"]c[/color]ard cannot be Normal Summoned or [color="#0000FF"]S[/color]et. [color="#0000FF"]T[/color]his card ca[color="#0000FF"]n[/color] only be [color="#0000FF"]S[/color]pecial [color="#0000FF"]S[/color]ummoned by removing from play all [color="#0000FF"]FIRE[/color] monsters [color="#0000FF"]from your[/color] hand, [color="#0000FF"]D[/color]eck and [color="#0000FF"]F[/color]ield. When this card is Special Summoned [color="#0000FF"]d[/color]estroy [color="#0000FF"]a[/color]ll [color="#0000FF"]m[/color]onsters on the Field and [color="#0000FF"]in[/color] your [color="#0000FF"]o[/color]pponents [color="#0000FF"]h[/color]and. [color="#0000FF"]At the End Phase remove this card from play[/color] It destroys itself. Also u can starlight road it. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkwolf777 Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Its broken because you only to have 1 Fire monster to Special Summon it. I can slip in this card and 1 Fire monster (read: Only 2 cards) to make this an easy nuke for the field and my opponent's hand without really modifying my any of my Decks. Also, just because you can Starlight Road/Stardust Dragon something doesn't justify anything. That's like saying Chaos Emperor Dragon isn't broken because you can Divine Wrath it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 how can i make the effect btter in OCG Words.????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 its TCG xD just copy and paste my fix with out the blue ofcourse also make blow up all "other" monsters cause all will kill her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 ???? senatheEND What???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Your improving Maple, it is overpowered, and some OCG errors, but your OCG is getting better, decent picture, good name, and sensible stats, just need to perfect the effect & OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 [quote name='Maple' timestamp='1292803945' post='4865886'] This Is A New card I made Hope U Like. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9936/330701.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play all FIRE monsters from your hand, Deck and Field. When this card is Special Summoned destroy all monsters on the Field and in your opponents hand. At the End Phase remove this card from play [/quote] change destroy all monsters to all monsters except this one or your opponants monsters on second main phase or such because the card would just blow up itself. also make it have to destoy a certain amount of fire monsters because i have a 150 card deck and about 4 fire monsters. some may not have any. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zancrow the flame god Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 you should probably make it so she sends all other monsters on the field to the grave instead of destroying them. that way, your opponent can't activate starlight road and get a stardust. When this card is Special Summoned, send all other monsters on the field to the Graveyard. try that effect it is kinda op, but i've seen much worse. so.... 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poinl Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 [quote name='Fenrir-chan' timestamp='1292810639' post='4866249'] you should probably make it so she sends all other monsters on the field to the grave instead of destroying them. that way, your opponent can't activate starlight road and get a stardust. When this card is Special Summoned, send all other monsters on the field to the Graveyard. try that effect [/quote] your profile pic is like IMAFIREN MAH LAZAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 I have updated it but the effect want change and its a difernt link. wierd.Fixed glitch edited it and ready for some more Help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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