Ignis avis Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/1255/230256w.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]This card can attack once for each Overlaid monster on it during the same Battle Phase.[/spoiler] Picture: Jazin Kay [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/830/230256.jpg[/img] Picture: Google [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/8427/230256f.jpg[/img] Picture: Google [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/664/230256h.jpg[/img] Picture: Google Feel free to post any Constructive Critisism you like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Everyone is doing this now.. But by all accounts, nice name, picture, useful effect which doesn't make it overpowered because of its mediocre ATK. Quite balanced and generic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Yeah. I just wanted to try it out to see if I could do a nice card with the new type of monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seattleite Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Hmm first effect for an excess monster would probably mean 3 attacks per turn in most common cases (2 level 4s).. seems kinda mean Second effect I think is a given with all Excess monsters in general, i don't think you have to put that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Somehow missed that the second effect was a giving. I'll edit it out. Plus added a bit of support for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Added a new card. Support for the archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 They are all awesome but my favorite is the 1st, the excess monster. He has an awesome balanced effect and the coolest picture (its from Jazin Kay, of course) 8.5/10 The effect of that serpent may be a little OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 1st Card: Simple but effective. Would probably be one of the most used Excess monsters. Probably OP'd. 2nd: I'd change it to "from your hand". Not from your Hand, Deck, or Grave. That'd be OP'd. If you say just from your hand, it should be okay. 3rd: Meh. Boring Equip Spell that makes Myriads beatsticks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Updated Serpent to just Special summon from your hand, changed Myriad Fire to a continuous spell with a different effect, and added a trap for some protection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 20, 2010 Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 The new trap seems better than the others. 9/10Now you edited the cards, they seem better. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignis avis Posted December 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Thank you War Chess. Myriad Fire was just something quick, didn't put much thought into it so when I saw the comment I looked back over it, and I like the new version much better. Glad you like the new trap too although it's weaker than cards like magical cylindar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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